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So yeah this is amazing! For some of you who don’t know Call of Cthulhu though it’ll be a little confusing. First let me explain how the dice works here, So basically it works like if your sanity in this example is 80 if you roll over 80 it’s a failure and if you roll lower it’s a success. Pretty easy right? Anyway some terms here are shortened so if you don’t know, you really don’t know. Here’s some words from the story: SC (Sanity Check), KP (Like Dungeon Keeper ya know in DnD), HP (Hitpoints, Health), APP (Appearance) and it goes on like this so you basically get it. Though there are special exceptions to the dice rules such as in the 2nd world which had it’s own things.
Anyway later on in the third world the MC gets a - 15 from the KL which means it adds 15 to whatever he rolls. Anyway the rest of it is based on how successful the rolls are and that’s how the story progresses. It’s like reading a Call of Cthulhu game instead of listening to one. It’s funny, exciting and a hell of a ride to read so I really hope that this gets chosen despite how low a chance that is. Hope you found the review informative and I hope you read and give some coins for it because it really does deserves some attention at least.
This novel is good.Sure,it might not have good grammar and the story sometimes not making sense it still is awesome.A whole 112 chapters are free and the main charater is strong but not too strong.All in all i would recommend this novel!
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While the character development, world, setting, and plot are awesome there are still avenues for improvement. As a note, I really enjoyed reading it, I just think reviews without input are pointless.
My first complaint would be the perspective, it's written in first person but shifts around like third. There's more of a difference between written perspective than whether he does something or I do. Information dumps they would ignore or overlay with inner dialogue making it feel much more like you're in their head, for instance. Third person follows the situation and first follows the attention of"I", so it's jarring when you read stuff that "I" isn't paying attention to. You didn't go totally wrong but there's room for improvement before it actually feels like you're reading from the character's perspective.
Another point of improvement would be dialogue. Regardless of who is speaking, it sounds the same as the narrator/"I"s thoughts. Two people expressing the same thought often do so in very different ways. Not every character needs to reverse the syntax of their sentences like Yoda, but giving characters distinct voices really helps the readers see them as characters in a story instead of the source of information the author chose to speak a sentence. If you think their lines in an accent it can help, but that limits you to the number of accents you can think to yourself in.
Similarly, each perspective also sounds the same, the inner monologue doesn't shift in tone or word choice depending on who "I" is. This is one of the benefits of shifting perspective in third person, the tone of the narrator shouldn't change. That isn't the same in first person. Everyone's head sounds different, and that means every perspective should sound different.
I have a crush on the main character, like wow you built your characters in an amazing way, and I have to admit you are a talented writer, amazing novel and so entertaining
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this novel is really a fun and cozy book to read. if your a fan of harems and everything come with them then is for you, if you think he’ll abandon his significant others; well fear not they all move with him. The cherry on top? Author releases a significant amount of chapters daily/weekly.
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The words were kind of poetic. Each phrase represented the time and situation the characters were in and the use of the language was kind and mellow to the mind. It was very interesting, I look forward to more chapters in the future.
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