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What can I say......
I am absolutely loving this novel.
Good story
Although there are few character introduced due the novel being at starting stage the characters written/made are too good till now.
I hope their will be some netori/stealing wife(mi*lf).
Salute to Author.
Keep it up
And thank you
realy cool concept, I hope it continues, hooked already .
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I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.
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I like the story especially the way it introduces the characters, the mc is well written to, i like how if we get a chance to reincarnate to the world we want that would likely be like his one. Anyways great job author-san keep it up pls it's only two chapters but i'm not forcing u, u can take ur sweet time.
If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy.
Writing quality is deplorable.
That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice.
Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it.
To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes.
cheers
While yes the story has potential i cannot get any more from the story itself because of the chapter locks after chapter 18 causing me to really question why the auther did so and I am very mad for that reason as most chapter locks are at chapter 40+
My first issue is the title which is far from catchy.Then, secondly, why do you have to explain the physical character at the end of the chapter? I think it's better to integrate it in the narrative.However, despite all that, the author is quite successful in describing the power of mc's videographic memory. Especially the way he uses it. It's so cool.And lastly, I hope there will be a lot of interesting intrigue in this story.
TrashTwo chapters in and mc already show signs of heaven defying stupidity
Its an amazing story with some simple flaws. The setting is similar to ”The Legendary Mechanic” but in a cultivation world. Mc is a npc in a world where players are soon joining. Spoilers ahead: The first flaw in the book is the time discrepancy. The cultivation world and earth have a 5:1 time ratio, yet mc somehow uses a store you can use once every month twice in less than 10 days. Similarly, when one of the players are brought up they are always shown to be streaming without taking into account the time difference between worlds. Finally some glaring huge problem is the fact that mc never tries to study his occupations: Poison Maker and Alchemy. One of the mc villain skills lets him get sort of an aura the more death he has on his hands wether directly or indirectly, and making poison and selling them is an easy way to get a huge body count, but it’s not even considered.