nice boo, really love the different stories in one bookNoy too longvlike most book,I'll eventually get tired.Keep it up [img=update][img=update][img=update]
what the fk is wrong with the author one moment mc is a girl the next it a boy. can't he just stick to one and stop making all this mistakes that like the basics
Smart mc who’s controls most situations is always a fun read.
raw..........pls........ .. . . . . . ..
Comedy that revolves around misunderstandings...... this is a gold mine. Shame about the short chapters but stable updates makes up for it. TAKE MY STONES!
The grammar is pretty bad and it’s sad that the author is from the US. I could barely get thru the 2nd chapter.
I have read 60+ chapters and made the rating very lower suddenly because:
Writing Quality: Still good.
Story Development: The development seems a bit less interest. I just cant wait for their existence will be exposed and the whole world's reaction about them.
Character Design: I have no comments.
Updating Stability: I made it one star because whenever you published the chapter, I cant get to the next chapter ecause they are privilage. Its 4 times that I didn't get the new chapter, ive been immpatient for so long!!!
World Background: The more I read the story, the more about the Fantasy World seem like the other military vs fantasy stories, simple like any other. I want something like the modern ones has advanced tech vs fantasy with superhumans and powerful magic.
I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
This book is different from the other system books I've read before. It is so refreshing and well written.
This story needs to continue or I need to know where I can find this and finish reading it.
The story is fast paced and the chapters rather short. Also, there are some grammatical errors but it doesn't make it difficult to understand. Give it a try if you like game-like stories.
I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.