Man.. I like it. The title already made me wondering what's the novel about, and when I dive it the story, it's a worth one. Although there are some minor mistakes, the story itself has a great potential. Keep it up! Good luck.
As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story. The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform. I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
One of my favourite resurrection type of novel. It is not cringy like the others and the story line is flawless. The writing might be long and kind of not that great, but I still have a great time reading it.
It's been a lot of time before the last post. The development thus far was very good and it had a lot of potential, so please update fast or else i can't help but drop this novel.???
I only read until chp. 40 so i cant say how its afterwards but its quiet good, nice written and good development but there are also plot holes, the most glaring is how his identity was found out which makes no sense at all.
How do you want to make a background check of an In-game character, whoes data are guarded by an high tech AI and the officials dont give out information + the hunted one gives no clues out about his identity... that is one big glaring plot hole.
Very well written novel. I like that its set on 20th century not a lot of novel is set on this time period most are medieval period. This gives a fresh feeling on the novel.
if there is any critic its in the world building mostly about the colonies (africa/south america/asia), there was not much mention about it even though it played a huge role in that time period.
Really started strong was a great read but after about 480 chapters or so the translation changed the names of people, places, and skills. So instead of being able to read and enjoy like I used to, I now have to re-read each paragraph to make sure that I translate the translation with the old names that you are used to. So in honest opinion if you want to read this novel be ready for a huge let down before it ends and have to do some translations yourself.
And message to the author going forward. Don’t change your translator mid story it is horrible to the readers who have been with you for a long time.
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I tried reading it I couldn't get into it also many other people make valid points cause why would the mc be that dumb
Early review here! I don't know what the first word in this novel is but the synopsis got my attention! Really like cultivation in a modern world so this gets an instance of credibility from me. I'm tired of the whole clan, sect, young master b.s. and a more advanced society could do this genre better imo.
Warning: Minor Spoiler
Quick Review:
1. Very Good Writing (top first percentile in Webnovel), funny comedy, and near-perfect grammar + spelling (only minor mistakes which too are very rare)
2. Consistent and constant updates with well sized chapters(1 per day currently)
3. Story Development so far interesting and fun to read with twists.
4. All main/side characters have an interesting backstory, with their personality shown through actions.
5. Interesting dystopian world set up in the future
Conclusion: A solid recommendation from my side, recommended for (VR)MMORPG type novel fans, readers who like comedy and anyone searching for a good read!
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