The protagonist is ruthlessly determined, enduring hardships while waiting for the day of revenge. Initially, I started reading because of his good looks but continued because of his coolness. His strategic skills are top-notch, a master of plans and tactics, fearless in any situation. His physical strength is second to none, but when cornered, he can escape in the blink of an eye. What I like the most is that there's no whining about fate or destiny, just constant action. So far, I don't find it annoying at all.
As the author I am not confident on this novel, so if you ever like it just say so on the chapter comments or you can give a review. As long as there are readers, I will do my best to update daily. And of course I will rate my own work 5 stars. Thank you!
it a good novel,which mixes modern word with all the western and eastern fantasy mixed together.
the story only starts to develope from 3 rd chapter.
Love this story, fantastic writing and food description! Really goes in depth into the history of food and how it is intricately connected to the Chinese culture
Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel:
1. World Background (so far):
1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm.
2. Story Development (so far):
2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours.
2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness.
3. Character Design (so far):
3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now.
That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea..
P.S. Good luck with the novel author.
A great novel with good focus on the MC and good character building. Great paced with very little filler, although the're a few chapter released, the world building is amazing. it's one of the better cultivation stories I've read.
Starts face-slapping left and right. Im fine with arrogant characters if they’re smart like scoring the sacred body mc. but this book is just painful
I really liked the story, a very original idea and very well written, I look forward to reading more, I hope the author continues to write.
If you love TLM then give it a try.
This Novel is quite good.
similar to TLM.
by the way congratulations
Se ve bien.
La historia tiene potencial.
No puedo esperar para leer más.
Ohoho interesting very interesting indeed
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.
Dear writers please continue the story.