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There is a lot of fantasy out there that it is easy to get turned off. That is because a lot of it isnt good. But when done good, fantasy can be engaging. This is fantasy done good.
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What a good read!!! The writing style of the author is immersive and I can't wait to see the progress of our MC. I like this story of Alexander. 5/5. I hope to see this novel be complete.
i dont give reviews normally, but this book is great. its one of the better ones of the "useless hero gets abandoned/thrown out/betrayed" genre. the story isnt going too fast, but also not too slow. all in all a great read.
I dont know about the author affecting his rating by creating alt accounts. if thats true, its pretty scummy. His story on the other hand is also pretty scummy.
The quality of the writing is not bad, i can understand whats going on even with the weird time jumps. The problem for me is that i just cant get behind the underlying meaning and essence of this story.
The author's writing comes across the page like a child trying to write like an ***** to justify that he understands existentialism, with banal prose about an unjust universe.
The main character is evil, and doesnt really have any sort of weight or qualms about it. He goes from normal all his life to murder without any character justification. Being evil and mc is fine, there are a bunch of those and I have no problem with it. Yet, this novel really makes being evil so uninteresting.
The MCs main conviction is that the world owes him something. What?!
His life is of someone being pampered and rich with no real suffering. Yet, it sucks cause he is so untalented and its unfair. BooHoo, whine, whine, whine. Its also really annoying to read, that this whiny child then gets a chance to change his life with help from a god like being. So does the character learn anything, strive for anything, or go out there and try to be better. The short anwser is no. He arrives in a land of magic which is almost identical to his own world, but there is magic. Is it difficult for him in any sense to navigate this new world? Nope. Is there any problem with him trying to get magical powers. HaHa..., no. He has money, logistics, and manpower rightoff the bat. To then literally discover how magic is created in humans after sacrificing vagrants and the homeless. I would also like to mention that he was given some weird ethereal power for guessing things, and then he would be provided a either hot or cold response by better google.
He doesnt earn anything and is given everything on silver platter. He is unapologetic with his whining about how he is special when a god like being tells him he isnt. He is just the worst.
if you like that sorta thing, this is your novel. i couldnt make it that far in. if the novel progresses in a way later down the line to play on those themes and maybe have some character growth. thats awesome. Im just not down to go on that ride.
Ive gotta be honest but, is it just me or im feeling more dumb as i read this novel ? The quality of the content by that i mean as i read this i cant help it but notice there are lot of mistakes here and there at some point it rivals some of the mtl ive read i dont know about others but iive elt like it needs to be re written honestly the plot is a lil cloudy for me due to it
An above average novel. Has similarities to Fantasy Simulator and World's Best Martial Artist. If you enjoyed those two you might like this. Not too many negative things to say. This story doesn't spice up the cultivation genre or correct many of the cliches and errors that plague it. Chu Yunfan has a chubby best friend, obtains crazy OP inheritance, etc. I could go on but you get the point. Still, you should give this story a chance. Despite the cliches this novel flows well. No crazy nationalism or rape that I read yet so that's a bonus.
Storyline is Okhave some nationalismkinda boringtranslation Quality is averageGive a try to pass timeit didn't hook me up..............
World Building: Mentions a bunch of realms, higher than the otherwise highest introduced, randomly.Plot: Handsome strong MC everyone wants to be his disciple. Then they proceed to continuously pick fights with him/his disciple for the first 20 chapters.There must be some kind of widely spread brain illness in that world...
I like how the MC is a cautious person and likes to study.
Writing is excellent, background and update stability--it's all pretty good. Dialogue is top tier, the narration is great, OP knows what he's doing. OP is good at building things up, world tensity, chemistry. Cool stuff.
