It is an enticing start! Makes me expectant of the following chapters... It is an enticing start! Makes me expectant of the following chapters...
I like this novel cuz of this OP mc that have a godly powers that it bored him to death but i hope that Author will never abandon this treasure ever again...
Good story........................................................................................................................................................................
It has been a while since i wrote something and i hope i'll get some feedback to improve my writing.
This story is something i wrote after reading a pretty large number of xianxia novel, i always hated the way those mcs go around collecting females like Pokemon and swinging their swords like retards at the first person who opens their mouth, creating a bigger problem and an enmity with a clan/sect, then repeats the same thing after 20 chapters.
So yeah i'll be avoiding that.
AUTHOR FAN OF YOUR WORK.author why do you do a NOVEL about THE GAME MASS EFFECT centered around mine girl LIARA TSONI the MC she is MASS EFFECT FAN GIRL that reincarnated as LIARA TSONE with some kind of system a TECHNOLOGY SYSTEM or a system you use in your novels, author. plot MC Liara TSONI needs to unite the galaxy against the god machines reapers, AUTHOR THEIR NO NOVEL OF MASS EFFECT IN HERE CENTER AROUND LIARA.so do it for the mass effect fans that love Liara, THANK YOU FOR THE NOVELS.
This is a great story and very entertaining, I read this when I was frustrated but well this is what I was looking for. ha ha ha ha.
Thank you author and continue the story.
It is good and refreshing for a wuxia novel. The system is new and development pace is good too. The story is well balanced ................
just isn't a good novel, up to chapter 16 there isn't anything good to say about it, even compared to other tiral reads it's just below average in every aspect.
Why did this even get picked? Out of the 12 novels that didn't get picked 9 have better ratings than this one...
Enjoyed reading it. Not the serious type of novel but quite enjoyable. I don't usually post reviews since i dont know how, i just did this to support the author. Anyway thank you and good luck. I like the names though
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Mostly for XP, but while I am here:
1.I like the main character
2.I like the side characters
3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website)
4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though).
Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)