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Pleasantly surprised. Went into this with no expectations but enjoyed volume one. Hope this continues and curious to see where the author takes Ed.
It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because...In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughtsAt around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially actingNow when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaningI'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)
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Love the premise, hate the execution. The author uses the MC marrying a fox demon as little more than an excuse for the super natural organization to pay attention to him. No lovey dovey newlywed antics. No heartfelt "I know your a Demon fox, but I love you anyways" confession. Not even an explanation for why he can see her tails poking out of the bottom of her dress at the wedding, but nothing about them when they sleep together. There is almost zero world building at all. This is a modern world where spiritual energy is awakening causing creatures to transform. That's it. The MC and his wife are apparently well of but nothing about what there jobs are. Only off hand mentions of the MC having just finished a big project and a casual "Oh, by the way" revelation that his wife works at a kindergarten in chapter 20 when she tells him he needs to drop her off early today for the field trip.I really love the idea behind this book, but it needs more focus on the relationship between the MC and his wife to make the readers care about them. The jealous superior at the supernatural organization, who everyone knows is just a two-bit side character villain, gets more screen time than his beloved wife. I really hope it gets better in the future and the author is just trying to draw it out so that the relationship doesn't feel rushed or forced but right now if feels almost non-existent.
I absolutely love this book, it's one of my favorites. I understand it can be really difficult to write books, but I really hope the author will make a wonderous return!
I didn't read the novel but I find it sad that you have stopped writing novels because of haters. I know it's difficult to ignore their insults and bad comments, but I feel like you shouldn't stop doing your passion just because of others.I, myself, write a story for fun and the only reason I post on this platform is to share it with the world and improve my writing skill from their feedback.So what if people don't like it? Are you writing novels for others or for yourself?You say that your story is 'trash' but as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. When Ronaldo was born, was he already as skilled as he is now?
I was drawn by the start of this book, it was a lovely start. Just the book cover alone was enticing. Keep up the good work Author, the storyline is amazing.
No LGBT tags or any mention in the synopsis. In chap 7 mc is making out with a guy. How is this in male version of the app? Dont you think you should mention it before 2 dudes start to kiss?
The authors story about Star War was a very well written novel and I thought I couldn’t find a better one. This is it boys and girls. The peak!
