don't drop, this story is very good.
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[Up until chapter 23]
Deleted my other review cause it was trash compared to what I'll say now.
Nothing needs to be said cause this is just that good.
An absolutely lovely read you have to try out no questions asked.
Author well written
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Honestly one of the best books I've found on here. Characters with depth, interesting developments. a lot of elements make it seem more real and down to earth. if you are looking for an enjoyable positive read. this is it.
No vale la pena leer la novela.
Nada nuevo, niños de 6 años corriendo de derecha a izquierda intentando parecer sabios y si no empezar a llorar y matar o confabular contra todos.
En fin, después de mucho tiempo sin leer novelas chinas decidí volver a darle una oportunidad y elegí esta, pero por mi desgracia es completa basura.
This story is very interesting to continue to follow. The plot is well structured and the words are well used. To be honest, I almost never read stories about games and this makes me a little confused hihi
But, no problem. I like this
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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The quality took a tremendously steep rise in quality in Ch 1-20. The story goes into more detail about the cultivation and training process than any novel I read so far. The realism in combat techniques is decent and more than I can ask for from someone who does not train. Better than immortal mortal in every quality, characters, realism, detail, and generally what the rules for the powers of cultivators are. No pointless exposition and a flawed but likeable mc. Author puts time into his chapters and doesn't mass release in exchange for quality. I can see a rise in quality if the author puts more thought and planning into both how the mc develops his skills, interacts with others, and matures over time. Ideas are good, but execution and taking the time to break down every part of the journey in a fun and interesting way is what makes a truly unique novel. A rival / friend that pushes the mc to greater heights is 100% more interesting than the concept of talent. Please, I love your book, never give it up
Overall and good points:
So far, it is the typical transmigration story with a system. It is however, not a revenge story and the aim for now is to survive. The background setting is quite interesting family wise. On top of that, the content is quite easy to comprehend. Nevertheless, what makes this story interesting is unique and unexpected antagonists and plot changes- the silver lining of this book. The thing about this book that I really appreciate is the presence of intrigue and calculations on what could have happened and why things happen. A sort of human behavior prediction.
Cons:
It is hard to call the style as outstanding, not to mention triggering curiosity is rather hard in beginning chapters. Character could be more developed, there is a lot of wasted potential, especially with what happened to bell, whilst the unexpectedness is quite entertaining, I see an ark wasted. Also, the dialogues make it hard to immerse fully as they sound as though taken from a modern setting and a bit bland or too explanatory. Another thing that turned me off, was how easy the character gained points. There should be a more gripping, heart throbbing journey. Maybe because it’s the beginning, I can’t seem to get excited. Additionally, other than the mc journey being too easy is the lack of any sort of moral compass. I can’t see the difference between the mc and scum.
Adding this after reading chapter 8, but I really cannot see cliff hangers and conflicts get resolved too easily. It’s like the ark ended before it began.
Advice :
Perhaps, add more flavor to the character such as stoic, lively, cold, passionate, devious, scheming etc. i know it is a character setting on its own but the mc seems bland. And add more conjunctions and sentence structure variation so the readers doesn’t get bored. Stop wasting arks and plot points. Also, this one is probably me, but I am really tired of demon gods.
This IS GOOD!! GOLDEN! A DIAMOND IN A RUBY!!! you all must read this-
a bit fast pace but its enough to make a whole new world for us readers. He's pretty much a god by chp15 lol hahhaha
The plot is very interesting. The writing style is great. I loved the story.
It drags you in more and more, hooking you to read on.
Great story author. Good job