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Can't wait to read more of the book it is very interesting and it has me very anxious to read more and thanks for the chapters so far.
Hey everyone, Author here!
Just wanted to pop in and write one of these reviews like every author does (from what I've seen). I just wanted to, firstly, thank you all for reading Biohuman. It means a lot to me that there's people other than myself who are enjoying Biohuman (at times even disliking it.). It really does help solidify how real writing is. :) So thank you all for reading and following along Lee Seng's journey!
Just wanted to pop in and note some stuff since 270~ chapters have been released (wow!).
1. MC is whiny early on. It does taper off and I'm sorry he came off that way early on. I don't know what I was on but I wanted to show this duality with the MC early on and pretty much went overboard with it. 50-60 chapters in and it does taper off. His personality starts to shine through as a hothead and a patiently impatient person.
2. I feel like it's my lack of writing this but I'll specify here. He does have Fox ears. He's a fox boy and has powers that come into fruition because of that.
3. 270~ chapters in and there's a lot more exploration on Fox half and Protocol half. More exploration in other areas but you'll eventually understand more about both halves by the end of Volume 1.
I'll probably put another review out in the future, but I just wanted to clairfy some stuff and give thanks to supporting Biohuman! [img=recommend] It means a lot to me!
Put please do let me know what you personally want more/less of, what you want to explore, etc. I will try my best but I will say Volume 1 will come to an end... I don't know how much chapters will be before we hit that, but it will end and I do have something up for Volume 2. :)
Thanks for reading this far. Thanks for supporting.
Please do let me know of the following if you wish to voice your opinion on it:
- What you want more/less of
- Grammatical issues
- Spelling issues
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
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read it on mtl. Overall very good, but the author dropped novel . with a super fast paced final chapter where many storylines weren't completed, more questions than answers. the main reason - according to the author "My book is all too low and I won't be able to pick it up next month. The current subscription is getting lower and lower, and the income is terrible." If you don't mind how the novel ended, I highly recommend it.
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The same generic story tada for the 100th time
I am looking forward to this one and can't wait to see what happens. I love this kind of story and it make the go by with out me knowing while reading
Just the first 6 chapters absolutely amazed me you should put some more effort into this book I bet it would get in the rankings really soon.
it's like pizza very delicious and well um.... good? .......................................
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