The synopsis of this story gives me the edge to wanna continue reading to find out what they were forced to do. Nice synopsis and plot. Descriptive too❤
I like the story and the plot is great. A lot of new character that has interesting personality! Good writing style! Do keep updating when you're free! Keep it up dude~
I enjoyed how brief this synopsis is. Its such a great plot, the writer has made an amazing story. I totally enjoyed the very first few chapters of it. Big up.
There is a lot of fantasy out there that it is easy to get turned off. That is because a lot of it isnt good. But when done good, fantasy can be engaging. This is fantasy done good.
The description is extremely interesting and simple and that is what draws you in, nice, but you can work on being more descriptive like in the prologue it would have been more nice if it was a bit lengthy and more descriptive, but all in all a very interesting concept and a well written story line
in case no one notice my comment, I'll let you know here.
I am the author and sorry if the update was slow. I got into a school with a dorm system and we cant bring our electronics. but when I get home, I will write back everything I've written in school and make sure you guys had a lot of updates! stay tuned and don't be shy to drop criticism and point out my mistake because I am still new and I would love to hear people's opinion.
