I know that my review means nothing because this book has a lot of reviews that I can ever imagine but all the same I would love to leave a trail that I read this story. More ink to the authors' pen. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
This was pretty fun and confusing to ready. With the release of the latest Chapter though I can see that’s it’s taking a huge turn and I can’t wait to see where it’s headed!
THIS BOOK IS WEIRD YOU ARE ALL WEIRD FOR LOOKING AT THIS IM WORRIED ABOUT THE WORLD WITH PEOPLE LIKE YOU IN IT AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA
I am the shameless author reviewing his own work.
An original web novel that I wrote to improve my skills.
I'm an ******* writer.
A generic and unique original novel about Hoshi and his second chance at life with a system.
He has a dream of becoming a world-famous chef.
The chef system will help him reach that goal.
Expect foodgasm, generic tropes, long food descriptions and memes.
Maybe a harem? lol
This novel contains Magic, Comedy, Cooking, Business, System, Second Chance and Game Elements.
This is a Hidden Gem, however, not the bad kind that has to be polished.... Some books are called Hidden Gems but the grammar is bad... Some books forget to have unique characters....
This book is the opposite and has interesting characters, a good world background, and a mixture of eastern, video game, and even some other obscure genres inside of it.
The author didn't take on more than he could chew, though, and seems to let each chapter linger before he writes it...
Give it a shot...
Why not, right? You're looking at this...
Honestly, this novel is quite enjoyable and has a lot of potential........................................................................................
the background of the story is good, though a bit unclear, I wish there were paragraph separations, it all seems like one block of text... it can definitely improve and it has hella potential! keep going!
I didn’t realize they let litttle kids write here, the story is worse then invisble dragon. Avoid to save brain cells, or face becoming braindead like the author,
Pretty big copy pasta that turned stale real quick. Nothing special here. Might be enjoyable for someone who is completely new to the genre or has not even read the original novel this one is copying. Although I would the original isnt that good either... Not worth wasting coins on
This story has an interesting prologue. Even with just the start, this is very hooking. The narration was legit and easy to read. With finishing touches, this will rise above the rest. All in all, a wonderful job creating an awesome novel!
This Korean novel is really good so far and has a fairly likeable mc. The mc is a bit thuggish at times but not overly obsessed with killing everybody who looks at him funny unlike xianxia protagonists. The mc gets reincarnated with a necromancer class and which mixes interestingly with the body's inherent divine power. There is action, some comedy, and (so far) a solid plot. Definitely give it a try and see how you like it.
It's not an easy case. An imbalance between gameplay and character world. I like the gameplay. I don't like reading about events outside the system.