I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter.
In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions.
The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job!
The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there.
Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun.
I just hope for two things:
Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth.
Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties!
And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
