well I got tricked in the first 19 chapters that this is a good novel but from chapter 20 it gets trashy the mc is a absolute idiot like come man is the mc the mc or his subordinates or intruders because they get seen more and decides everything for him even things about him self
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️
How come the author wrote something this brilliant. The chapters are quite long, and plotwise the book is like fire, spreading in the minds of the readers, to read more. love it.
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The story starting is little overboard. But the MC's characters are really good and evolves along with story. Loved their interactions woth each other and the baby.
First of all, I really love science fictions/movies. I love how the author is building the world background. I am hands down to the writing style and plot. READ this novel, its more than worth it. ♥️
nice i was bored almost all of the apocalypse story's are usually all male lead's so supper good to have this story can't wait for more ?
This is the author again (shameless 5 star but pls forgive me)Announcement:1. Thank you for the support. This work will be going premium around Aug 2019 (tentative) so please stock up on SS.2. With the chapters getting heavier, please let me know if you're keen to join the Truen army (proofreaders & editors). This role is completely voluntary but I expect serious commitment. This is to relieve some load of Ash my current proofreader who has been doing a darn good job or making it readable. Please thank him for catching all the awful errors BTS before we go live.3. There was some major rescheduling because I realised how blind I was. We are already very much into the second season but I did not separate the chapters accordingly. The mass update of chapters and spam notifications have caused readers to unsubscribe. I sincerely apologise for that on my end. It should not happen again in future, it's fixed now.4. We have both the official fan club discord and my personal discord that I sometimes ask for opinions and updates. If you love this book, please show your support by joining either of them.Rebel Army Discord Server: https://discord.gg/UrtDMXnZero Chan Cult Discord Server: https://discord.gg/RuvtKXx5. I have a character profile google docs (refer to author announcement chapter). However, it is poorly maintained. If you see something that has been missed out, please highlight it to me, thank you!Lastly, I just want to let my readers know that the success of my writing dream would not be possible without you. I cannot express how thankful I am. Every comment, like, gift and subscription means a lot to me.
Thank you for writing this book, I think there is some punctuation mistake but still tolerable and enjoyable✨✨✨✨✨
It's well written, but the MC is an idiot (Mother is lying on the sofa with heavy dark circles under her eyes, sweating with a tired appearance two red snakebite marks on her neck... Thought of MC: "She's tired but okay, I won't bother her."), asking stupid questions of the system (What is a meditation room for?), making stupid mistakes (Without any strength wanting to travel the world through a portal where beasts, monsters and demons live, for the same reasons, leaving the house at night to investigate a figure he saw and going carelessly towards 2 suspicious people arguing in the dark, to make worse 2 powerful people.) and showing a brave and confident front to the point of hitting anyone who offends his store, but then he shakes in fear, freezes and gets beaten by someone who is weaker than him (the fat one had 5 stars, he had 5 fire plus 2 or 3 other elements), the system explains the most obvious things possible, which I would think normal if he explained everything or almost everything, but there are many things that are not explained as to why or how, and the MC just does it as if he already knows but doesn't know why (like the price of the store's servicesor how they work, how the system doesn't take anything from the money that customers pay "it all goes to the MC
Awesome novel.
Nothing worse than a system with personality. The MC is forced into situations and cant make his own decisions, garbage. To make matters worse he is even special as there are other people with systems and multiple lives, so this is a story about who has more luck and forced plot.