Embodied Hearts

nice book..... love to read more

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I like it. You should try to use x2 or  something when he kill stuff  instead of writing the same stuff  again and again????????????

Please continue, so far Im loving the idea, how you made Fresh, and Im honestly exited at what he will dk next, will he be good or bad, just explore and do nothing? Or meaby find so.e big secret about AUs? Also wondering what would happen if he meets any Gasters or other characters like flowery or chara. Overall, amazing, must read, trust me, I too was skeptical at first, thinking whether this was good or bad, but now having read it I can confidently say that it is amazing with a great original plot forming. Keep up the good work author.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.