"Happy birthday to you Happy birthday to you Happy birthday to my beautiful Riley Happy birthday to you !, Now in African! Gelukkige verjaarsdag vir jou Gelukkige verjaarsdag vir jou!" While the man and the women appeared behind the cake.
"Official Bai is right, As the mother of all realm I can intercede for my beloved subject but Official Shun is still a high-ranked official. I should give him some face by following his suggestion, after all, he knows the laws more than me!"
This book and background was well written, I fell in love with start to finish. It had me on the edge of my seat mos of the time ?????????
I started reading this because it wasnt premium now 120 chapters in i have to pay gg well played. ??????????????????????????????????????
Superrr, I wonder what's the mission they were given.I story as it goes is good, more characters than usual, not only focused on the main character ✌️Give me the vibes of game of thrones ?
Author, is this dropped? pleas tell me its not, I really love this web novel
The story shouts Adventure with every chapter you turn, Alex started as a shut-in unable to interact with the outer world but when he got sent to another world, a burning thirst for adventure emerged from within his chest, leading him to awesome adventures worthy of a read with his party mates.
? Hi there, my lovely ?u200d?phoenixes?u200d? & ?dragons?, this is the seamless author of Phoenix Interrupted or Nix Interrupted for short, Mrs_TNT??? Thank you all for stopping to check out my novel, I am working on writing better synapses because I feel the current one is too vague. With that said, I I have 18 FREE chapters up, so please come read them & let me know what you think. If you want to support me, please feel free to send daily powerstones & make lots of comments as it tells WN that my novel should be advertised to more people. My novel means a lot to me as I'm working through some traumas that will not be distinguishable between them & the complete fictional drama contained in this novel. With that said, I hope that my novel can reach others as well as help at least one person. ?I was inspired & encouraged to keep fighting and to stay strong by a few ?novels and ?authors exclusively on here on WN. I want to pay that forward & do the same for at least one other person in the world?, even if I may never know it!??That's actually who I am, and I didn't make up the pen name, I've been asked a few times.
I tried. I really did try to read through this. A sci-fi reincarnation story? I really wanted one to add to my library, but this is bad. 1. For the first 3 chapters, there is no explanation. Just full-on action, where you don't know what is going on. Some of the names and terms are used interchangeably, so you can't even keep a consistent track of what you could understand.2. The story definitely needs an editor.3. When you finally reach chapter 4, and you figure you'll get something slow paced, it suddenly feels as if the character is overpowered. There is no brakes to it.4. In almost every sentence of chapter 4, the author uses the character names over and over. Like in a first POV, someone used "I" all the time. It's like the word "he" was limited to 5 a chapter. 5. Overall, it's quite easy to tell the author is a bad writer. There are a lot of mistakes. And I would give him/her the benefit of the doubt if it weren't that they were also a bad storyteller from as far as I could tell at 3.5 chapters in.
Hello fellow webnovlers, shameless author here with a shameless five star review on his own bookJust wanted to say I'm looking forward to read what your thoughts about this story are either by reading your comments on the chapters or by posting you reviews here as it would really help me improve my ideas and the writing quality for future stories Hope you enjoy my book and have a nice day
The story is interesting and good, but it cannot be said that it is perfect It is worth reading and it has time, it can be better. The story started slowly, but from the 6th episode onwards, the story became more and more complete.
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