henrry3874
great world building and character development
The system the mc has isn't what I was expecting, bringing down my expectations to rock bottom. The title might as well be changed to 'Immortal Hero: I can see the Answers.'That's basically what happens when the system is used. MC uses it, gets the success rate and should have called it a day. But wait a minute, there's more! The next system blurb states what the MC needs to do to get that percentage to 100%, reducing the MC to your average MC depending mostly on the whims of the system, and not using their own skills and intelligence.
Even if the name is changed this novel is better than most trash that get released on Webnovel every week I like the story.???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
this needs to be chosen I like a lot of the elements in this one :) have a happy happy happy 2022 even though me saying this is a little to late
5/writing quality is great for the standerds of this site3/ idk stability of updates4/ good story development so far4/ all characters are bearable and somewhat reasonable so far5/ world background is somewhat unique and goodGood book but the author is absolute TRASH at titles like why not name it "Obelisk" or "The Great Monolith" instead of a cheesy title, quite literally describing the main character. Also never put the word system in ur titles it sounds lazy and of poor quality.
To be honest, nothing worthy of reading except for cliche stuff i could arrange in my head. And what about the bot review spam for 5 star, this is overrated novel, i would say.
5 stars for the author! The smile never left my face while I read every chapter. I love the humor that's going on. I love the main character, he's relatable. Wonderful book, definitely staying in my reading list. Keep it up!!
Hi1. The Einstein once said. The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results. The MC confessed to the very same girl more than 400 times during 4 years without getting any answer. Just from that you can see he is an idiot. That girl is the same. Maybe it is good that two idiots found one another. But from my perspective it is a tragedy.2. The story is good for 2-3 hours of reading but it becomes boring later. All the same.. I really do think that books more tham 700-800 chapters are overkill. Before writing the book you should know how to end it. Make a story and only then write. Imagine if you start to build a house but you do not know how it will looks like or how many floors/rooms it will have what will you build?? This book is exactly the same. Author just spilling words for updates. The more you read the worse it becomes.3. There is no system to measure the person power. The MC learns something becomes stronger and stronger but how strong exactly? How much one skill stonger than the other? Magic force, dream force, star force e.t.c. what are the ranking between them? I completly lost track... It all looks like a mess and who is stronger depends on author mood. If it is so why write about cultivation, levels, forces. All of them are meaningless.4. The overall feeling about the book is negative. People stuggling, dying, scheming, used by others.... There is no real trust, support, loyalty, happiness in the book (almost none). Most of it is negative. Can not continue anymore.
I have to be honest after chapter 200 he keeps getting nerfed no matter how any else he tries to say otherI'll date my reasons to 1 every time that the author has sid when he decides to level up he can instantly get to peak 5th order just off of using his exp saved but then him using all of it only gets him to beginning 4th order Bro has been gassing up the MC TO MUCH Then when actually used becomes weaker then he should have been Bro has been saying if used all his eco saver it he's guaranteed to get to peak 5th order I waited 300 chapters for 1 level up at this point I would go read apocalypse : my girlfriend is a succubusForgot the actual title since its been a while but at least not expecting a level up300 chapter of him getting humbled to be only getting to 4th order just so you guys knowLeo got to 4th order before the Mc His excuse sis that he has a high cultivation speed when Leo was a stage above him I'm pretty sure Leo is like 8-10years younger??????Those are the reasons
HOT and steamy book. Very unique plot of romance between CEO and secretary. Page turner...can't wait to read more!!
Please update
while the book itself was well written, I feel that the second half was too rushed. the author had a great opportunity to enhance and lengthen the storyline, and it just felt railroaded into an ending thay honestly wasn't satisfying for me at all.
