I liked a lot of story and plot, the story is very good, I liked it a lot, I laughed a lot until I couldn't take it anymore, very interesting and amazing protagonist, I highly recommend
great novel wasted to f it can't be continued, It veers off slightly with your normal mainstream game novels but in a great way. It bring a sort of different flavor on this type of genre perfectly good world building and so far the plot is really good
I'm getting tired of Chinese stories with English names its weird.I'm getting tired of Chinese stories with English names its weird.I'm getting tired of Chinese stories with English names its weird.I'm getting tired of Chinese stories with English names its weird.I'm getting tired of Chinese stories with English names its weird.
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it started well with RUNES but after joining academy it transformed completely into beast taming with no usage of Runes at all......WHERE ARE THE RUNES GONE AUTHOR?????
Even though it's not a completely new concept, it looks like an interesting read..........mhmm...................mhmm..................mhmm.
While I have already created one review for this novel I think I want to go into more detail about my thoughts.
Writing Quality: This book has basically zero spelling/grammar mistakes and is fun to read if you like fantasy and magic! 4.5/5
Update Stability: I gave this segemnt three stars as sometimes the author can go awhile without updating but I can’t really jude because every author has their own writing speed. 3/5
Story Development: The story isn’t that fast but at the same tine isn’t to slow. It takes time to flesh out characters and the world that they reside in. 4.8/5
Character Design/Development: If there’s anything in this novel that really catches my eye it’s the character design and development, each character has something to add to the story and each one has their own thoughts and feelings. Some are loyal and honarable and some are mischievous and scheming it has a wonderfull array of different characters and yet they arent so confusing that you loose track! Overall this is an excellent part of thr story. 5/5
World Background: The book gives us a great deal of knowledge of the world of Aeon but but dosen’t drop so much on us that we forget half of it the next chapter. Also the world has plenty of mysteries that we have yet to discover or explore! It gives us knowledge
in an easy to comprehend way.
Overall 4.8/5
Final thoughts: This book is great and here are some things to expect, The MC is not a genius and does not have a billion iq and is slowly learning about the world around it. The characters are impeccable and I could rants about joe good they are for a long time! Honestly this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read, virtual and on paper. I will always read this book. I highly recommend! Overall I rate this book a 4.9/5
Only read 10 or so chapters and had to stop. The story is near unreadable due to translation errors and numerous grammatical errors. This feels like it an MTL translation which could explain why the updates are fast. So overall while the premise of the story intrigued me, I find it overall too tedious to read to continue with it.
I read until the free chapters.
I enjoy it at start because mc kind of smart even though there's no world introduction where things just keep popping up all a sudden superpower,magic, cultivation, system and rift etc. It lacks world building but still entertaining until the flaw start showing up when he awakened where too much ranting/monolugue happen.MC biggest trait as smart all of a sudden turning to idiot where all his secret and explaining how it works one by one to his best friend even considering telling the system and his cheat until he understand it how much of a idiot he is? For the all people he should understand how to be cautios because how people treat him even betrayed by his childhood friend. This destroy the novel to me. author changing his Character from smart to idiot for a plot there is no stability. I mean he can make a mistake but not like this this is idiocy to the higher level.
Then. Even villain want to kill mc because color of hair. LOL
I can only rraise it 3.5/5.0
Again an amazing work, everything is great. Not so fast or nor so slow, it has pace of story. So don't destroy it, and keep going the way that you feel is alright...Keep up the Great work....
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