I really like this story, keep up the good work author, it means the world to me. try reading the story from a to z, you might me able to spot mistakes more easily ?
I found out that it is really a nice read. as a sci-fi and cyberpunk genre that I can see through here which are my favorite. I love how the author made the character as humane as possible, but for story development aspect. the pace starting from ch 4 is pretty unstable. try to made it consistent and it will be a nice read!
The plot is intriguing and suspenseful. ? A bit slow at start but then it catches pace later on. Some minor grammar issues but proofreading can easily fix it. Overall, I like it and recommend to all lut there to give it a try! Keep it up. ??
Bro no system, no cliche, no bs young masters just a very good well written novel. Very pleasing man i swear i read all 60 chapters in one go. but the ending killed me, cuz i fuxking hate cliffs. Defo a top novel worth voting for.