g0lem
It's a nice story with consistent updates.. Keep it up author.. . Your writing skills are really nice.. . Good.. . Good.. . Good.. Good.. . Good
This your author, sorry for not writing for a long since I felt that I made the MC too OP. Everytime I write, I get confused in the status numbers as there are too many and needed to be accurately calculated but I tried to minimize it as I can. Sometimes I can't make of a single sentence due to focusing too much on the numbers causing some of my phrase to be BLAND.
I dont know if I'll post a chapter so maybe, JUST maybe, I'm going to stop
Coolio
Title: I Have An Impenetrable Fortress/我有一座无敌城Rating: N/AStatus: 420(Ongoing)Start Date: 2020/06Author other work: History’s Strongest Senior Brother, History’s Number 1 Founder, I’ve Possessed the Demon Sovereign’s Body.
Well well well, I discovered this Novel a day ago and how could I express my satisfaction better than just saying that I binged 800 chapters without taking a break? It’s been some time since I felt like reading that much at once. I’ve had an amazing time and can just say that I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Author, thanks for writing this. This story doesn’t get the recognition it deserves by far.
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This is the best magical realiSm ive read so far on this app, i hope u all support it so that we can continue reading This fantastic novel, been waitiNg for 3months for someone to pick this up and translate to english. pls rate this novel 5star and support it
Horrible Grammar started off well and turned into the mc turning g into a total b**ch that cant even take care of it's own benefits. Grammar level is at an all time low. I've seen primary graders write better than this
So, not really a review (for good balance i put a 4/5) because i'm just near the 15th chapters.Honestly the writing etc. is good but i lack passion for this one.I think the "sims simulator pov and writing" is killing me (i know for the cliffhanger about that).if it's like that all the time, I'd rather quit.If a charitable soul can answer me that would be nice.
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This is interesting but it gets boring after you know the structure of the story. if you mainly like MC expanding his business through interesting ways this is the novel for you. Cultivation becomes the support material in this story, it isn't the main focus.
I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character.It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world.Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
