Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 stars
Writing quality
It s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes.
Story development
Now i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters.
Character design
Now, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39).
Update stability
Well, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars.
World background
I don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 stars
Overall 2.6
its looking nice. The storyline does look lil cliche but looking at the synopsis,I'm guessing there's still more to come.yes.i totally like the book.
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The start of the story may be off putting to some people but the development is good. you gotta keep on reading if you wanna get to the good parts that'll keep you hooked.
Only Synopsis is enough to attract me, the book is good, writer you are doing great job, grammatically the book is good, but what attracts me more is the start. waiting for more.
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A story that is simple yet compelling aboard of your news feeds! Another novel that will surely make your mind dive in it while reading it! You should all check this out, a realistic fiction ahead of you! Great job, author!
So far, this book is remarkably well composed. I love the story plot and how the characters are being described to the fullest. I'm really enjoying the story and will definitely be reading more of it. Great job author.
Holy hell im really only doing this to get a quick fast pass so im just going to do most of this just to use up most of my characters im still not sure is this is used to get a free fast pass so frick
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