Bad world building
Boring lack competitiveness
Plot doesn't make sense
Math problem
Lack details
Translation Quality - is good, easy to read and understand
Stability of updates - is good, fast and will keep you wanting more
Story Development - is pretty ok, but too slow for my taste
Character Design - is good, has nothing that stands out as good or bad to me though
World Background - is also good, im in it for the ride cause im already interested by what is revealed right now...
this is a pretty good novel, at the start you will feel that theres no stakes involved and later find out that there is, story pacing seems slow to me so that contributes to that.
mc aint someone with super intellect or some op skill he brings to the game. just an average dude that is lucky enough to discover some hidden mechanics in his chosen class.... he is somewhat of a harem protagonist when it comes to acquaintances as a lot seems to be pretty women which qualify this to a harem tag.
someone commented that the plot armor is strong in this one, as events seems to happen near the mc that will benefit him in someways..... like, what else do you expect? its about an average guy that gets lucky and uses that to improve himself...what? you want to read about a guy slowly grinding mobs to get to the top without **** happening? lucky encounters and events will happen to some random guy right now or in the future somewhere in the world, just get into the mindset that author is writing about a guy that happens to get that lucky chance.
also it aint all about luck, the mc is hard working and likeable, theres a reason why he plays the way he does right now while he is also working a full time job, he thinks of the game as a part time job and dont want the game to take too much of his time... but things are happening that are slowly changing that mindset.
the way the mechanics of the game are written are very fun to read and also well written, im not proud to say that im too stupid to really delve down and notice the small details, but the author has not let me down yet...
what makes it special from the rest of the VRMMORPG novels?
nothing really.....
but what makes me read it is that it is an average VRMMORPG novel and i like this type of story....its consistent in quality and right now im very much enjoying it
story was good but guy's do you know what the Raw name is?
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pretty good novel, harem buildup is pretty good till ch 280~ Mc is b3coming stronger relatively faster then others if u think as, all the girls around him have been training since they were children. Main revenge as a whole is still a long ways. But it is going there. Hopefully he goes through with it. Rarely any novel ever does that. it be a nice change in reincarnation hero story.I would recommend everyone who likes harem and characters with actual personality who grow, this is a good one.
Very good chapter. I read them all and decided to small little review over the all for the time being. I must say you have very little grammar issues for a first time writer. In addition to fact these errors do barely anything to distract from the story. If you don't mind a proof reader I wouldn't kind helping you.
It’s just so good, I can’t even. I was seriously considering never reading this as I have no interest in music or the performing arts, but I have read it and I’ve seen the light. This is a fantastic novel where every character feels real, from the main character to minor side characters. I would highly recommend giving it a read.
One of the worst stories i read in a long time.filled with plot armour.the mc is partially dumb and retarded with feeling almost similar to ****** towards his sister who is a cocky,ungrateful,b*tch. If you are going to read this i warn you - the author has a very weird and twisted sense of love .
Finally a system novel that has a new take and isn’t super op or cynical yandere or tsundere or sadistic etc hope the author keeps this pace
keep on this great work going always forever ... expecting more novels from you... all the best for you Charles .
This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!
This story is getting more and more interesting after the introduction of a really mysterious character.
Only 6 Chapters out and I have already become a fan of it. I have seen many movies and shows on bullying and I thought that this story must be about bullying as well, however when I read that the story is inspired from the author's real life, I knew I had to read it and boy I am so glad I did.
It has a very likeable cast of characters with my favourite character being Vansh and Reyansh is relatable to an extent. The inner monologues add so much depth.
The last three chapters have been 10/10 in my opinion. I just wished the author wrote at least one chapter per day because then it might have had been picked up by the Webnovel and the author would have started to earn.
I understand that the author is a teenager though and that he has a lot of things to do plus writing a story like this might require a lot of effort.
I wish all the best to the author. I hope he becomes successful!
Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1