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really a very interesting premise, the characters have a gradual construction, and the world and its style are very pleasing to me. She has incredible potential
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Great idea, but bad writing quality in the early chapters. Also the events are not that clear...............................................
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I read all 40 chapters in one sitting and wish there was more. Disappointed that it is on hiatus, but hop for more in the future. There is something oddly satisfying about someone constantly humiliated and bullied getting such immediate and powerful revenge, even if it is predictable at times. I really hope that the author adds more soon.
the story is about a dude who becomes a slave to a spoiled brat and he's fine with that he's not even mad when he becomes her servant he just like ya ok who cares about freedom all I will do for the rest of my life is serve my master and I am ok with that just a slave and his master that's the whole story
The idea is really interesting, but the execution desires better. It's all bare bones. I wish the author best of luck, though. And to read Homestuck.
It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.
Spoiler alert: This is a damn fantastic book. I love how the author sets you up with a ton of mystery and questions at the start then artfully lets it unfold around you as you read. Ooh the level of skill gave me shivers!The characters, more particularly their dynamics with each other, are superb. Evin is fantastic, he is witty, opinionated, but equally tormented by his father and burdened by the pressures of society. He has hopes, dreams, and the author does a great job of making believable, if not entirely realistic characters. Such raw emotion in a book is hard to come by, too. I really felt so much for all of them. The world building was equally as good. Although I had a lot of questions at the start, the more I read the more everything pieced itself together, unravelling the mysterys of the world like any good book should. Not once did I lose interest, the story was fast paced, well thought out, and bolstered by some absolutely top quality description. If you cant tell, I really dont have any bad things to say about this book. Perhaps give a little warning about the abusive nature of the father? But honestly, this novel was so compelling, I would recommend it to anyone either way.Author, fantastic work!