It's really good
This book is pretty darn good First of all the writing quality is good
it's a bit early to review however I believe this novel has great potential, the storyline is original and it really grabbed me within just 6 chapters. The author seems like a great person as well so that's another plus. I hope to see you in the top 50 soon :)
One of the best I have read.
The pace is moderate, and his personality his like a actual villian.
I like how he slowly breaks the heroines.
Though i would suggest the system to given him some ability, like some mark appearing on the heroine's body, when they fully submit, could be a choker tattoo on neck, or in thier abdomen.
And some kind of meter which can tell thier obedience and affection/hate.
Please take note that this is my first time composing a novel! It’s suggestable that there will be errors during some of the contents . I apologize if the novel is not to your liking or standards! >~<
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
What the ****? qidian is chasing me, every novel I read and think is good, qidian does not select? **** you old is already the 3 book you can't even vote for, damn it, I hate it.
wtf, why is this sh.t rated 4+? I never called anything sh.t. but this is one, and explaining why I did so would be describing sh.t and deducting why this is worse that real life sh.t as it may be used as biofuel. Author gathered some curated cliches. then did a speed run with it. so it's now a gushing diarrhea.
If these books are chosen which im pretty sure there were higher rated ones they should not be in the tria read. In case you dont know this was in one of those vote for a book to be translated things. Definitely higher voted on books tha this. Also I guess it was picked so the cotes dont Matter and the competition does not matter
That's my very first review, I hope to support this book a bit hehe.
The story here is a real hidden gem which brightened my day. It's a light and well written story with lots of bondings. The emotions and the actions of the main character are logic and well explained.
There is also the comedy tag which isn't just for show.
All that mixed with an achievement system make it a great story.
Hope it will keep a stable release.
Thanks for your work author and good luck !
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If you like harem novels with a great cast of characters or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself.