Reaching For the Stars

Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel.

The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration.

I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days.

Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly.

But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.

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All good

Good novel so far. MC isnt stupid Or an Emo loner that lust after every woman he sees.

He has a system and actually thinks on which stats he should increase that benefit him instead of spamming charm.

He already has a group of friends but dont worry if you think mc will expose all his secrets. Author already confirmed to me that the mc will not tell anyone about his system or share it to help. (I Really hope this stays true all throughout the story)

First entertainment, mc will be streaming. Im Enjoying it so far so please Dont drop.

Anybody reading this, you have to read this. This is my book number 1 book so far, dont get let down by his depressed self it will bet better.  I like how the author made a realistic friendship

This is a really good book and I like the characters ( cause their personalities and the shit they do are pretty relatable) but if he’s streaming I think it would be great if you just give some highlights of the games like you’re currently doing and if we have fight scenes in the near future don’t extend it for like 7 chapter (like some other books I know of) as it would be a major turnoff. The pace is good and he’s not hunting for pok-cough I mean women so that’s nice. I think there should be a little more world background as we don’t know much about it but it’s nice to read overall and easy on the eyes.