This is just trash
after chapter 40, things stop making sense
and Mc become a brain dead hero
This reminds me of Superman’s backstory scientist saves his son and sends him to another world where he has a special power check check and check
Overall good story I would enjoy reading more keep it up
So far, an interesting novel with nice lessons from the father character, as well as an interesting storyline. However, in the first chapter, there are too many commas in each sentence and many run-on sentences. It gets better after that chapter, but there are still many wrong tenses used, the characters don't really speak their age, and there's incorrect character quotation punctuations and capitalizations (ex- "back then, these were the days!." should become "Back then, those were the days!" To the author, I suggest researching a bit more on quotations by reading physical books in the english language).
But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!
Are there no chapters this week? will there be update of chapter next week??
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong
really good novel, it pulls you in and you just can't stop reading x)
i'm looking forward to your work author :D
all the best !
and good luck on your exams !!
This novel has a lot of potential. It's interesting and unique. Though the writing style is something I'm not use to. And it's not good to dump information in one go. But nevertheless this is an interesting read.
It is a nice story . The author has written it well.
one of the rare novel that has great potential
I've just finished the first 50 chapters and I'm loving this novel. The writing quality is good, the flow is harmonious and many of the characters are endearing. The dialogues are well made and the descriptions are on point. I've got no complaints and would like more people to give this story a chance and enjoy it.
Pls don’t drop