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Well, decent story, I gave this story average of 3.8 * for this story... Well, I really like the concept and world-building of this story, the story is interesting and the characteristic of the character also strong, but here is the thing that bothers me and makes me less enjoy when reading this story1. The author really wants the misunderstand troupe of MC is weak from bystander continue, we'll I know it is to drive the plot but continuing it for a long time is annoying. Moreover the build-up each time when people offend the MC isn’t get paid by the conclusion, aka, the conclusion is not really satisfying...2. I know that the MC is a kind hero before, but how he reacts and doing something is really annoying, like what the purposes of hiding his identity when you literally always blurted out his identity as master... And the stupidity why he hides his strength...3. Less screentime of MC’s slice of life, I mean I am interested in this story because the title and the synopsis also tag make me want to read about MC slice of life as retired OP HERO... But his slice of life time is so little here, also what got us hooked about this genre, like face slapping etc isn’t included here, just like I said above, the author introduced many xianxia’s cliche arrogant character here, but the conclusion after they offending the MC is not satisfying.
there's not much depth in pretty much all of the story. everything happens so quickly with minimal dialog or even the main characters thoughts. one second he is fighting in class and one sentence later without any explanation or expanding on what happened or other people's thoughts the class is just over. I can understand time skipping over his first fifteen years even if I felt that his parents weren't really explained at all or his thoughts on the situation cuz it can be explained later but to the whole time he is in the academy the story just feels rushed. it's like "he arrives at school. he meets a friend. he arrives in class." obviously it's not that ridiculous but that's what it feels like.
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This was a really interesting read. I love the character designs the setting of the story. I dreaded every time I finished a chapter because I knew I only had a few more left but I couldn't stop at all. I absolutely loved it and will definitely be looking forward to the future updates! Good luck.
It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.