I really have no clue why you ruined this novel. It was going at a steady, and good pace. The story was good, and interesting, but you just had to ruin it with the NTR yuri…
Decently written though not without it's flaws. The story is never the less interesting and the story feels rather novel for as much as I've read. (25 chapters) I would recommend this as a book worth taking a look at to see if it may fit your tastes. I have added it to my own library and will read it as I am able.
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More plot following villain MCs paired with yandere harems. To start this review off I'd like to say that I genuinely, from the bottom of my heart hate both harems and yanderes because they're lazy, uninteresting and gross.
This novel isn't a trashy power fantasy for some degenerate to self insert into, it's an absurd comedy that playfully messes around with popular novel tropes.
It feels like the MC has a harem (fortunately it doesn't even feel like a harem as there has been no contrived romance so far) of clowns and I'm all for it. While all of these characters are stereotypes they're actually parodies of themselves. The situations that arise when these characters interact is basically all this novel has to offer and it is funny.
So at the end of the day this is a fairly well executed gag novel that parodies old school Chinese MCs and their harems. Though this review is written about chapters 1-19 of the novel which is very early on so this could go either way, I just hope it stays on the gag route. 2.5/5.
If you are going to only Skim this Review, then I'll tell you it is a ok story quality-wise, but it is a very fun story. Even though this is a story based around a mmorpg, the author did not think too deeply how mmorpgs work as a game and just used game elements to create story *******. Like how losing a level upon character death is used to create stakes and consequences for the players about to do a risky plays which is compounded as higher levels become very grind heavy. You can see how this would make fights more tense when the odds are against the heroes and death in a game substantial but not fatal. However, when viewed as a game, this mechanic is incredible harsh and not player friendly with how easy it is to die in this game. When you die, you lose the level, the stats that came with it, any skills that unlock on those levels and all proficiency with said skills, and maybe an equipment piece you had now free for anyone to take. These are very powerful reason to not die for a story character, but as a random player, this death penalty will kill alot of player interest.
Now if you can ignore all of the game stuff as a possible game and just take those at face value, then you can focus on the best parts. The characters. Alot of main characters are quirky and memorable which leads to alot of fun interactions and situations. I could talk about them in more depth like with the game problems but that will ruin the fun.
TL;DR: Story about a bad mmorpg with funny and enjoyable main characters.
Cliché plots forced down your throat like the air you breathe is made out of them. MC saying that he is in a place that no one goes to cus it is absolutely useless and then after 10 hours of tiring leveling up suddenly an Assassin attacks him for no reason, assassin turns out is a strong, beautiful girl of a female guild with problems and that is where is dropped. But there are no mistakes in the grammar and all so a little plus.
it's good, I like the concept of Amnesia in a game and it's time reversal power. This novel has OP MC so there would be more plot armor and insane luck I guess.
when is the next chapter going to be. i am enjoying your writing so far but it is too early to think on weather the stpry is good or not yet
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Very similar to I Will Transmigrate In 10 days so if you like that then this is your cup of tea only thing is the updates are a bit slow and the World building is almost zero, I still don't know if the real world is ancient or modern times
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You want comedy? read this
You want true harem? read this
Perverted MC? read this
NOT DENSE MC? read this
OP MC? read this
Having a bad day? read this
Having a good day? read this
Having exam tomorrow and you don't feel like studying? read this
Parents are not home? read this
Why did I write this? read this
Okay stop. read this
STOP. read this
F*ck this. read this
To describe this novel I believe it would be accurate to say it's the equivalent of eating a frozen meal from the dollar store long after it has passed its expiration date. The MC has less intelligence than an ant and balls smaller than a hydrogen atom, want a little more detail on these descriptions? He hunted level 1 rabbits until he reached level 14, he didn't use his AI and failed to properly utilize his advantages by either forgetting to activate or deactivate said advantages. To top it all off while he was leveling his AI helper, instead of leveling her up as he leveled up he felt he needed to wait until he could just mass level it up to where he wants it. That's just the tip of the iceberg as well. Somehow he meets a woman who magically falls in love with him after hearing that he literally hunted rabbits for the entirety of his existence, he let his mother name his guild some completely idiotic name, and he is basically on the hit list of every powerful organization except for the strictly neutral organizations like merchants or town guards. He's essentially protected by plot armor the whole way through and the villains are so one dimensional that you can almost predict the entire story line. Considering there are other free novels which are far better than this, like there are better options for getting food than buying some television dinner from the dollar store, this novel probably isn't worth your time.