The story was quite interesting.... Character development made me think something out of the box.. Good work and keep up the talent .. Also the way in which the story is laid is something which I think has been a part of your life.... But anyways quite a good novel...
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I find everything in this novel great except the writing quality. The story and character development is phenomenal with little information of character background now and then. I find this story really intriguing and engaging. Eventhough i am not a grammar nazi, I have to say that there are many grammatical error which makes the senetence hard to read and understand. It will be better if such things are improved as i have high expectations from this novel.
Even by pure wish fulfillment and eronovel standards, it’s really bad, like really really bad.
I’m not even gonna bother with realism or anything. But just purely story wise
There is 0 detail getting money = hack/steal, write some numbers. That’s it
Making advanced machinery/ai/genemod “8 months later” there is just nothing?
Then he goes out to pick up a random girl at a party who we care for why?
It’s poor quality and spammed 5 star reviews baffles me. But I digress
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Though novels of the horror genre don't attract me still I would say this book was quite nice. It had that creepiness and horror which people find while reading it. Nice work.All the best for the upcoming chapters :)
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this book is pretty much interesting before even I started reading it!!the synopsis is catchy?the quote that appears when you first open it to read is so beautiful to??"a strong man can save himself,a great man can save others"I LOVE this quote so much???wish you all the luck?????I will absolutely continue reading it after I finish my exams?
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