Moar!
Just like my name. I usually like mech stories, but sc-fi in this platform keep disappointing me. I like the writing style of this authors, so I thought why not try it, and I was amazed by the story. Truly a great worldbuilding is put into this
Dont drop this peace of marvelous gem of a novel LOVE IT MORE PLZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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5-star overall. Everything seems good. It's true it's realistic fiction. It's enjoyable. And...WONDERFUL!!!
The story is really good. What should I say? Hmmm
The opening chap made a grand opening. And it sure did hooked me up, though only it has 1 chap for now. But As I have read, you have passable quality. With flying colors I must say [img=recommend] The only thing I can point out was the paragraphs were too long. Maybe you can cut them and let the readers rest in between
A must read!!!
The POV switching may get awhile to be used too but its definitely worth it!!
I especially enjoy seeing Quinn’s POV more as I find the military and the characters at that side more interesting... And Its exciting to learn more about the war and those eccentric hollows!!
The fight scenes are also very well written as well!!
Keep it up author!!
I doubt 99% of Chinese novels are written by AI ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
Another bait dog novel. The whole thing about him being a villain is FALSE, he is literally a normal MC and the protags are actually young master brain damaged type 3rd rate villains who spew 10 IQ comments and actions. How anyone thought this was a good novel is beyond me. The world structure and the other characters make 0 sense, a literal mortal who can hold more money than the cultivatuon country, thats like a 5 IQ idea that wouldnt work at all, and a big guild master has like 0 bodyguards for his weak daughter in her birthday party and she gets kidnapped with 0 difficulty even a retard hobo can do it
The story was good from the start, the plot was not bad and the character and power of MC grew pretty nicely but the quality just dropped so hard after chapter 40 that I can't bear to read it anymore.
Novel is ok but what really kills it for me is things like repeat chapters along with some of the moronic things the mc says or does and I’m just like how or why
completed at 273? is the author san dead?