Ring Of Chaos

Hmm, the writing could be better and the characters lack in depth characterization. The pacing is fast, and the MC is rather evil. Ignoring my personal opinion on MC, my issue is the psychology state of the villain. Someone that broken would not be able to safely transition to another world and accept a new family, because they are incapable of trust. A more logical conclusion would have been killing his new family. My suggestion is ground your character more, this will make them more realistic and more terrifying.

Right so I'm redoing my review because the author couldn't take me disliking his work and deleted my review XD

Anyways the novel is an average work with nothing special going for it. It's a typical novel with an added edginess to it. The author set up the story pretty well in the first chapter and I'm sure this is how a lot of people got hocked but after that its a slow ride down typical cliches I've seen many a time.

If you want something to read quickly as junk food while you wait for other novel's to update this isn't half bad for the purpose.

Very rough a lot of the problems can be easily solved though with a simple edit by someone even slightly proficient in english

The main character is incredibly edgy but expresses it immaturerly and incredibly often, as if he has 8th Grade Syndrome. His trigger word is death if you say that, or it even flits across his unstable little mind be prepared for a full on ****storm.

The largest flaws with the novel, in my opinion is the characters very exaggerated descriptions of himself and his the constant references to his past life, it doesn't really move on from that so your often pulled back to something that does not help build character depth

Hi everyone
Welcome to my novel
I am an Egyptian writer, and I am now writing my new novel in Arabic
I am translating the chapters myself
I want to tell you that the novel has 500 Arab chapters so far. But this is the first time it's translated into English. I hope you like the story, and I hope my translation won't stop you from enjoying it.

I appreciate your support, and I hope to hear your thoughts and opinions all the time.

This is some dope ass story with a crazy maniac mc and the plot is crazy and unique form others..
You will love the story and its progress is way good than some top novels.
Grammer may concern you sometimes, but for a reason it would not bother you much.
The progress makes you addicted to this ****..
Not for kids who loves kind mc, hates killing, help everyone and sacrifice everytime and ****..
Give it a try and you wont regret this ****(warning not for weak hearts).

Damn it man. This novel is fucking addictive. I’m so much addicted to it, I can’t describe it. I always keep thinking what will happen next. I just love it. So thank you jokere for this fucking goddamned novel.