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The story is really really good! The author has a great sense of humour. There are a few grammatical errors in the writing quality here and then and I would encourage the author to correct those, but, those mistakes can be possible since the author's native language isn't English and the writing quality is still understandable. The update stability of this book is quite fine. The world building along with character designs of this novel is a really really great thing about it. I like how the author adds such small details to the story. The one who is reading this review, I recommend you to definitely try this novel.
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Personally, this is a very refreshing novel to read. It’s basically a slice of life novel that doesn’t have all of the repetitiveness and killing that others do. The MC is hilariously arrogant at times and extremely cunning at others. I would definitely give this a try!
Extremely repetitive writing. Half of the paragraphs just reword previous paragraphs (e.g. "He was nervous because it was his first time." "Because it was his first time, he was anxious." and a handful of other rephrasings...some one right after the other).
Then the author uses A LOT of extra unnecessary descriptions for movement. It feels like he says, "He turned his body, lifted up his arm, extended his fist, and pointed at the object with his index finger," instead of just saying, "He pointed at the object." It feels like 50% of the chapters could be erased with zero clarity lost...in fact it would increase clarity.
Characters are one dimensional and boring.
Barely any MEANINGFUL world background or description. Especially bad since the author seems to randomly use four different ranking systems terms for monster strength with no rhyme nor reason (stage, level, star, and rank).
Ill be honest like it, has Pretty decent story all around,building,character,world. the only thing that annoys me is when the atory says only 1/in a mil can awaken their grimoir but 2 chapters later in everone has a gOd dam grimoir...... but then again its like them chinese Novels where they go their the final stage Of cultivation and next thing we know Those stages are everywhere. so much For Rare like a Phoenix feathers.
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this, you got me hooked from reading your first chapter. The characters were precisely described I am amazed~ Though I feel you were inspired by different movies compiled to one and you delivered it perfectly, Keep updating I'll be waiting for more!
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currently chapter 55. I think it's still worth trying............................................................................................................................................
The story at the beginning is very good but over time it gets lost and becomes monotonous and boring, the protagonist loses all his personality, after he separates from Greeg's family, he becomes a robot, he just does everything perfectly, he studies, cultivates, trains, sleeps, eats, etc., in a perfect way. And all the "problems" and "difficulties" he might face will be solved by his heavenly power. He just has eyes that can see everything, he has the best and fastest cultivation, he thinks faster, he learns faster to the point where everything his hundreds of years old masters can teach is learned in 3 years. he does all the other stuff. Basically the development in the novel is not automatic. And although the author tries to sell the protagonist as a VERY SMART guy, he can be pretty dumb, like when he didn't go to his father to train with him and save humanity after 1 year of training.
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