It is a very generic novel, the author at least in the first phase did not bother to explain things, he was simply writing superficially and quickly, in my opinion there was a lack of writing with more details and explanations, as it took only 2 chapters and the MC he goes from an ordinary human who planned the death of his parents and committed suicide (he was aware of his luck, money and escape were possible) to a great powerful magician.
I reading, but it is more out of false hope that the author leaves aside worn clichés and a little attention to detail and originality.
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Sci-fi has never been a particular interest of mine. I prefer literature, the works of Dickens, Austen, Shakespeare, Poe, Stevenson, etc. But I absolutely fell in love with this story. Well-written, well-developed, and well-paced; it's nearly perfect. Each chapter never fails to keep you enthralled and wanting more. You can form connections with the characters, and clearly envision everything that goes on. Truly a worthy and enjoyable read!
I've never really read a game genre before but this was intriguing to read, though there are a few grammar displacements, it was a good read too. There are only two chapters for now but the story's plot looks promising and interesting.
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I wasn't sure what to expect, but after reading a few chapters I can only assume the author tried to write a comedie.Try is the key word here.The jokes and entertaining situations fall flat, maybe the nuances are simply lost in translation, but there is really no merit to such a novel. The premise is ridiculously stupid, while the MC character falls flat and shows no initiative at all. I don't even knoe what the selling point of this story is supposed to be.
5 Stars straight up. I love stories that incorporate Cultivation, VR and reincarnation genres. Those three are in my top five genres. I only hope it doesn't go on hiatus any time soon.
Amazing work, the poetry in the start really gives vibes. keep it up, the characters and whole cast is amazing,can't wait for the end. Xoxo
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This is definitely one of the best the Trial Reads have produced in a long time, the 'copying talents' concept has been done many times but a lot of the time the restrains and rules on the system stuff like "he can only copy stuff once a month" and whatnot where he gets a few good talents at the beginning and then its forgotton, this novel is way better,The MC can copy 3 Talent/Cultivation Technique/ Bloodline/ Skill (with skill level) FROM EACH PERSON every day, he can only copy 3 at a time and it takes time depending on how much of a gap it is from his current skill level for that certain thing or the certain requirements for it, and most of it is totally understandable, this copying system works by 'downloading' stuff, so it works like a wifi signal he has to stand near a person within 20 meters and it downloads faster if they are using the thing he is downloading or if he is closer, and you might be thing "oh thats so tedious how boring
Wow! Such a realistic write book! I practically evolved into the novel... My heart went badump! badump!! it felt so real... Just first page kept me going on and on.. Great job author!
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