This is a great novel with a lot of potential, with a little editing, am sure people will realize it. Now it just looks like a block of words which are a little overwhelming to read.
It was a really great story just like a real life experience like it really happens when you are about to confess your feelings to someone so it was a great feeling reading such a story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible
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writing quality is good with good grammar and proper story writing. Good enough to keep readers retain the story.
The story development is really good with how you wrote only the necessary details and kept readers engaged with the story. I like how the story is simple and you didn't info dump it.
You are really an experienced and proper author.
The character design needs some work. I mean how people hate him because he is just poor kid.
And is Silvia a feminist. because readers assume things when you don't represent them.
I know you want to make things suspensive but just bragging about beauty isn't how you should introduce characters.
Other than that the story is very good.
The updating stability is good.
And world building is just good until now. As it completed in the future
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Apocalyptic world? I'm all for it..The protagonist though, how did he manage to keep sane after 5 years of just him and zombies. That's CRAZY!!
The best sports novel i have read so far.. I put a 5 for all.. the only thing that could be a 4 is the world bg since it is just a regular modern setting, nothing creative. But i still love this one and my current favorite. More power author, thanks big time for bringing us this novel.
I have to say i enjoy your work, so keep on writing the good stuff .....................................................................................
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the author did great in the first chaps, loved the writing style qnd alsi the characters they have depth in them.
the fact that i real all the thqt pro e how much the story is captivating and page turner..
it is the beginning of something big and i am so excited to continue reading
Hm i like the mc but i dont like overprotective sisters it just makes me uncomfortable but the story is a great read for me and i like it maybe i will let it stockpile till its on chapter 100 and then read it boodbye
I thought he can max out his skills in an instant, but he can only upgrade his skills twice a day. I must say I am disappointed,BYE.jahyshwb