The novel is good .But the MC is overly naive. Now don't get me wrong, I absolutely despise arrogant type MC's , but this time the MC doesn't even have self awareness. He is denying his achievements so much that it gets annoying over time. In a simple word the MC is stupid. The novel may be good later on, but first impression is valuable. If you cannot hold a reader to go through the first stages then it will be a huge loss. The MC can be naive, but being extremely stupid as well as being naive makes the MC a really unlikable character. So, I hope author can improve this.
Anyways I'm just ranting. Good work by the way.
I do not understand by those who give a negative rating.
Did you read this novel because of TAG • R-18?
You feel as though the initial 30 chp is rubbish and unimportant. If you want to read the novel of an immortal who immediately sex then read 'immortal only accept female' and you can masturbate to your heart's content.
Author I think you should exchange the [R-18] Tag with [Mature] to repel the muddling flies.
Overall story is to my liking of evolution type writing quality is okay, it not bad we understand the story properly that matters while it be improved. Another major issue is gender of MC like he feels male from the start also 'he' used most of the time. But in early chapter author just decided to make gender female in status pane. But that was still okay as I don't see much change in his behaviour but now at 40 or some chapter he has possessed an female body but that not the real problem but *little spoiler here* in auction he just bought an super useless pet 25 million essence just because it is fluffy and cute. My mind was just blown to bits. I just going to ask one thing to author is this an male lead story or female lead story. And if it is an female lead then put an god damn tag and if it is an male lead then also I don't like sissy MC. Seriously decide on one thing, I am going drop this if he is still same.
This is the story of a poor young man whose poverty even shreds apart their family willing to climb his way through society and into the top.
Frankly speaking, I'm not really fond with BL story but this one is intriguing and have nice plot. It is nice to read it on my free time and love to see the progress
I’ll say this is like a high quality mtl. Heck, it is mtl and not translated by a translator. Chapter title of chapter 5 itself speaks that its a mtl and even the content speaks to me that its mtl. Cushion is translated sometimes as a futon and seriously at least try to be consistent with the translation terms. Its unbearably annoying and hard to read. Webnovel’s trial reads as a whole is already going downhill and they dont even mask their greed for money at this point. You want people to pay money to read A MTL!!!! Are you SERIOUS?????
i know this might get deleted soon but i will say this,even if my vote doesnt count,i wont vote or read this as you are delaying astral pet store for iras copy of videogame designer
This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.
very nice, story is good and the characters develop well.
i actually enjoyed this a lot more than i thought i would. its about an mmorpg, but it has a small supernatural type feeling.
give it a try. you’ll most definitely like it.
The story is great, not cliche like most of the Chinese novels with the constant face slapping that happens each chapter. No crappy auction arcs or saving an old man that is actually influential or anything, no immortal cultivation bull****, just magic and qi. and the mc is actually kinda smart and doesn't make enemies left and right. It's just sad that there are only 60 chapters.
Fellow taoist you must restrain me for my pants are being soiled at the mere site of a great monster protag novel. If I was creaming during Python Rebirth, I'm realising it all tonight!
(I just really like monster Protags, we need more [img=faceslap])
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This is my review from the previous version of the book.
The story seems well so far, I hope you can stay constant with uploads and don't drop. Please don't make this a harem. Also can you not follow the gamer's mage way, but if you do make it original.