Read to chapter 32 and just couldn't do it anymore. The mc is getting nowhere. I understand there are troubles in his life but it feels like he doesn't have enough based off how you make the mc out to be. He is just too casual and laid back but has big dreams with too many set backs. By chapter 32 he should be somewhere especially with his fateful encounter. I feel you just made it too hard and too ridiculous for a beginning story.
Kids loses his only friend so he commits suicid...........mtherfker is this a serious plot. i cant. somekid wants 2 die cuz he lost his only fking friend
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Get a proofreader, dear god.
MC literally is a meathead who only cares about fighting and is so redundant to the point where he will repeat the same thing more than once in a single paragraph.
It was good but then after ch 250 the book became a bunch of nonsense that I can’t force myself to read this garbage I just wasted so much time
Was excited to read it, only to see massive plot holes everywhere. It was simply unreadable. MC's strength fluctuates everywhere for no reason, nothing he has is ever explained. Idk, just don't read it. Save your time.
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To be honest i don't find it interesting why not stay at the first idea of having 2 siblings get powers and make them each with unique powers having friends and family make stories interesting i don't see what people find good about killing everyone to make the mc gain powers ... it sucks that there is no real thoughts put in most of the stories no wonder they all get abandoned in the end
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A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist