Leaving a review because why not? ?This is my first book about kingdom building that I have read and I have to be honest—I am amazed as an author as well as to how different and at the same time different it is to write these kinds of stories! It must have been difficult!Anyway...Writing quality: I like how the author wrote the story! You could find less grammar mistakes and I like the creativity put on this when it comes to his writing in his action scenes. It is one thing—to be honest—that I am envious of because action scenes are difficult for me!For the update stability, it is already a given. ? I could see how continuous the efforts of the author to be able to update without stopping! ? Great job—despite the busy schedule! Adulting hits hard! ?For the story development, from the chapters of 90+, I could say that the author has been planning well of the plot. From the number of chapters as of the moment, you could deduce from the pacing that it is just right—not too fast and not too slow, giving the readers ample time to read and at the same time enjoy what the author has to offer. ? I could see surprises are going to be in released in the future!Character design—to be honest, I would have to read more to get a better say of this. But as I could see from the comments of the readers, they are torn between cursing the ML or either glorifying him. For me, I have yet to read more chapters to have a say in this so I would have to comment back on my review to have a better say on this aspect. ?Finally, world background. World background for this kind of story is something difficult in my opinion because you would have to think outside the box. To be honest, I could not pull it off! ? However, for the author to weave this creative world is something unique to his story—which is very amusing on his part! Well done! ?Keep up the good work, MoeJam90! ? Wishing to learn more from you when it comes to writing action scenes! ?
The book is great with regards to the world's backstory and the ongoing character development. It's just that it's so hard to read with a lot of grammatical errors. I suggest the author to get a beta reader or an editor in the side
Holy Guacamole! This is awesome. I'm getting major Armageddon and and War of the Worlds vibes from this. I absolutely love it! It's a breath of fresh air honestly. Keep it up!!!!
What the actual f*ck happened to this novel? Why did the translator dropped this? Please pick it up again! I have already waited for at least a month for this novel and there's still no updates yet ?
9 chapters in and word padding is already at work. How could he forget that he had Date Trees in his inventory? I mean, does he have a memory of a fcking ant? Also, he eradicated the Jackalans, the original inhabitants of the desert even the children just because they are in the oasis. You know, their own territory!? Also, the MC has the personality of a white slice bread, he tries to appears smart but really, he is just as stupid as the rest of the computer generated people that inhabits his territory. And to top it all off, this was not an original novel but a translated one. Meaning, it is just sh*t chinese novel all in all. I am seeing 5 star reviews in here and I honestly don't get it. Even the worst fan fiction of Harry Potter on this site is BETTER than this sh*t.
The novel is pretty decent, but I am not sure if the author has given up on it releasing. I need to know if I should just remove it from my library at this rate.
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This my fellow readers is great book and i very much recommend it for you. The writing is extremely strong and fluid, the characters are interesting and once you read it, it shall leave you glued to your screen????