great book I would say it's a must read because it's just that good the author also seems to like to respond to your comments so I give this a 30 out of 20
The story itself shows lots of promise... The execution of the story is poor. Many opportunities for good storytelling go ignored or get glossed over. If this is taken as a rough draft and got rewritten it has the potential to be a really good story. Just not in the state that it's in.
I have read about 30 chapters so far. I want to say that I really liked the development of the main character, namely that he is not immediately given a cheat ability to bend over, he also has his own problems that are interesting to watch. I also liked the purity of the update of the novel, and most of all I was struck by the author himself who can answer your question, I was very pleased as an avid MMORPG reader who has something to ask.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I tried to get into the story but the MC is a b complaining about everything when he has a second chance at life
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A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
This novel is a great one, but not for everyone.
It's telling about the various 'unusual' habitant of earth, various 'alien' civilization of the universe, and even to 'another world'.
It's not very exciting for those who seek action / magic battle (tough there is action, but not mainly). But it's exciting how MC deal with various situation in the multiverse.
And moreover, IT'S TOTALLY FREE!!
Well, not i mind tough if i have to pay, if the update pace is increase
Hello all, Please forgive my reviewing my own novel. But I only need 1 more to get to 10. And I think it’s a good idea to think objectively about what I’ve written.
I like to think that the first person - past perspective narrative lends itself well to this kind of story. Yes, we ultimately know where Desmond will end up, but it’s not about the “what” happens, but about the “how” it happens. We get to see Desmond struggle through new worlds, meet new people, and grow and change into a person he never would have expected to become.
If you like stories where the MC works hard and earns his powers, while facing off against curruption from within, gods, angels, demons and wizards. This is the book for you!
I hope you’ll give it a chance!
The premise was great, but then author decided to make the MC a villain who commit nedless cruel actions and make bad choices for the sake of looking evil. For example he choose an evil cultivator he had just seen as his subordinate to manage a city, when he could have saved the city lord, who looked like a trustworthy person and had more experience with managing people. Another thing I disliked is the total massacre. Read some others dungeon novels, it makes no sense for the death rate to be that high. Who would want to enter a dungeon where armies get decimated? Humans are greedy, but not that stupid. And sometimes the same rules you made for the tower don't works for the sake of plot. For example when the experience didn't get absorbed immediately by the city lord or when the evil cultivator absorbed the experience from the monsters someone else killed; among these monster there was also one with one layer lower, but you previously said that one could absorb experience only from monster with the same or higher cultivation. There are many other little things i disliked and i truly think it is a pity that this story took such a turn.
I love this novel.. I've read it before and I had a hard time remembering where did I read it.. of course I can't find it easily because it's a different title... Raw translation : Dad: I Was In College and Was Blocked By the Goddess of the School Flower
Good