I enjoy this story. He doesn't run around killing everyone. They don't talk about "face" all the time. Not everyone is referred to as a "ten thousand year genius". It's a nice change of pace. I always look forward to the new chapter.
I'mma be honest first 3 or so chapters were really good and I was excited for the rest. The writing quality could be a little better but I'm just being a little bit picky. However I feel like everything when he got to the highschool was just not that good though.
For example "the big breasted beauty" ok fine if you were just talking about her breasts... whatever; Not every other time you are talking about her though! It just comes across as lazy. Also, don't make a girl get a crush on him from walking in the room it's kinda awkward. I get that you may like anime but the mc speaks interchangeably different languages and you didn't translate ecchi to pervert or something similar?
Sorry I don't want to be too harsh. I'll still read it as well. But the writing makes the girls seem very 2 dimensional and just not very interesting. I don't want to try to tell you what to do but at least in my opinion the story would be much more compelling and interesting if you made the girls less like the 2d cutouts in bad harem anime.
Finally this is not super important but Is the MC black? I mean I assumed so since he was one of the first humans. Not to be racist or anything but almost no one in Japan is black so usually it would usually be noted in a Japanese girls internal thoughts. Is that why everyone comments on how black his hair and eyes are?
I don't usually post criticism but I liked the story at the start so I wanted to give my 2 cents.
Very similar to night ranger. Characters aren't always the best but it makes up for it with great action and pretty good world design. Other thing that I love is that it has a d&d based leveling system. Overall pretty good.
Too much dry information about various tower facilities being what level, and as usual mc is a dickless virgin who runs away from sex..... Whats the point of having a obedient female harem when u keep writing about a dickless vegetarian mc ???
However this are only minor issues so i minus only half a point... The story itself is mostly base development and hero development.... It is interesting with good pacing and i am looking forward to read more.
I love this kind of story, this is quite interesting to read and I did not get bored reading it.
I love the concept that the main character is evil, it's a new taste for me, and I liked it much.
Author, your Novel is marvelous! and because it is fascinating I added it to my library.
A legendary novel, the best of what I have read, I advise everyone to give it a chance because it will excel over all novels and I wish success to the writer and thank him for his efforts in translation and editing
I absolutely love this novel...story is awesome...better character development and best harem...I really recommend this to people to give a try
It’s very good so far and its worth the read.
This story has a good foundation . Writer is very good at her focus for the FL and ML....The heart is there..... The focus is there.... The development of the story is yet to unfold....The biological dad should turn up on the 1st birthday... The suspense will be thrilling.
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Where is new chapter????????????????????????????????????????????I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my god! This book is simply awesome. What an unexpected lovely story inside an apocalypse novel. I was glad that I've found this novel! I highly recommend this novel to everyone who likes rebirth, apocalypse, mystery, and romance. I know it doesn't sound like it shouldcome together but it does!Though a synopsis isn't that good but gives it a try for the first five chapters, then after that, I guarantee this will be one of your favorites!