A very interesting book with an original,well-constructed idea and a flow with a steady pace. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys reading novels about technology and games,with a hint of romance. A few grammatical errors here and there but nothing too serious
la historia parece interesante en general se ve bien pero le hace faltan ciertos retoques:
- la escritura no es muy fluida o cómoda para leer
- en los inicios no hay un desarrollo logico, falta el cuestionamiento interno del mc acerca de porque fue elegido, incluso si la razon sea por aleatorio, me hace dudar si el mc es muy ingenuo o es estúpido?, luego no se explica muy bien porque termino en la secta, uno se hace una idea por la sinopsis pero no esta claro, ademas parece que el mc de la nada sabe artes marciales?, incluso si le dieron las tecnicas al ingresar hablando lógicamente un humano del mundo moderno no puede solo ver unas imágenes(no se explica cuando lo aprendio) y ya saber ejecutar los movimientos, eso solo es logico en los mundos marciales porque tienen una base y lo ven muy seguido
- como se ve le mc?, después de un tiempo si lo mencionan un poco pero no hay una idea muy clara de su apariencia
ya como algo personal su personalidad no es apta para el mundo del cultivo, pero supongo que eso mejorara con el desarrollo de la historia, se espera .
esta es mi opinión para el autor, de pronto le sirva
13+ chapters in and I can really say for sure that this one's a lot better than the original one, that one is not bad, but this one is a lot better. I just paraphrased what Daniiii said.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
this story explores anything and this story will give you a better experience while reading, me as writer would rate this 5 stars because this is the one of my favorite novel
An average novel, no innovation and more of the same. The author could have explored more the cultivation of techniques in an unusual or absurd way and put some comedy.The special talent is forgotten with time and practically only appears later as a tool to identify items.Around chapter 230 the translator abandons it and turns it into an MTL translation and ends up killing the novel once and for all
I really like this novel and I think the pace with which it develops is good. The plot has me hooked as WELL. Keep it up author. I follow all your novels, thanks for your time and bringing us these stories.
Writing QualityStability of UpdatesStory DevelopmentCharacter DesignWorld BackgroundThe total score5.0/////////////////////////////////
Wow what an amazing novel as expected from the author, loved the writing style and progression of the storyline, amazingly written mc too, rating this a well deserved 5 stars??
Hey, i am the author of this work. any questions?
The opening of the first chapter is engaging and draws the reader into the story with its action-packed scene and mysterious character introductions. The use of descriptive language adds depth and vividness to the scene, making it easy for the reader to imagine the setting and characters.I would encourage the author to continue building upon the strong foundation they've established in this opening chapter. Keep exploring the characters, their motivations, and their backstories to create a fully realized world that readers can immerse themselves in. Make sure to balance action with character development and build tension throughout the story to keep readers invested in the outcome. Keep up the good work!?
Good book. Slow beginning but very rewarding later on. The plot is brutal, sinister, scheming, and sometimes even very touching. The schemes and machinations are very intricate and treacherous, so you actually need to use your brain to follow why which person does what. If you expect brainless OP faceslapping go somewhere else.
And one more thing : I don't know why but the comments section of the first volume are super malevolent. I don't get why the fan base can't be a little nicer. And if you don't like this kind of story why read 100+ chapters and comment something nasty on every single one of them?