Seems to be another cliche 'system novel'. What's worst that its a talking system which is basically mc's master or mistress in this case. With the whole mission feature of the system, it can order around the mc with rewards like a dog, which the mc will not refuse as the rewards are just too good. Its, slavery but mc just doesn't know it.
This is one of those story where the MC is always getting humiliated and it is kind of annoying. Don't bother reading it if you don't want to be frustrated by the MC getting humiliated left and right.
I will first tell you that this novel has high comedic element , is about a guy who fells that he is ordinary person but the people around him don't think so.
Con:
1: upto chapter300 no clear story plot goal
2: repeative scenario (upto chapter 200) after that it has unique linear growth in story
3: high content about food (pro for food lover)
Pros:
1: comedy
2: overpowered MC but not too undesirable and plot is not to stupid
3: low arrogant character
4: good story baground and world plotting
5: smooth transition in plot with no goal to a definite goal
It's too funny and good story so do try
Dollar store version of astral pet store.
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So far, the story is really enjoyable so far, with the characters seeming real and the world building is the best I have ever seen on webnovel.
5 stars for the synopsis alone. *huhuhu*
It’s a great story.
I’m not good at leaving a good review in order to help the Arthur by giving suggestions, so I’m just gonna leave this smiley face :)
The story is narrated by a legendary sword. This one point in itself steals the show, The sci-fi vibe is very optimum. the style of narration is cool and the plotline is great, Still, it could be more polished, for a project beginning, it's a good start.
I seem to have missed the attempted comedy tag on this novel.
Hi, shameless author passing by, I know the title is wrong spelling. I already updated it, but nothing happens. So I don't really know, and the cover is a bit messy, sorry for that I'm not an expert.... I hope you like my novel.