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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The best way to describe this novel is: Potential.The first few chapters have laid a solid foundation for what could be a great novel.The only thing that could be done better would be grammar.
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I haven't managed to read a lot of the chapters, but based on what I've read so far, the story is quite intriguing. The progression is not too rushed, but it's not too slow either. Every chapter was written with care. Keep up the good work, author.
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This plot looks like it's going to get pretty interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Also, the grammar is great, and the writing has a modern, fast-paced structure to it. Must read!
This is great. Love it, like the Mc, good translation... what else could you really want? Anyway check it out for a bit. I really recommend it.
This story is wonderful! If you love TRPGs you should get a kick out of this. Just try to leave your preconceptions of a fantasy world behind. Some common stereotypes fit, while many are lacking. The author does a wonderful job of world building, and an even better job of balancing humor and cold violence. the only part of this i even thought about not giving full marks too is writing quality, and only because there were a few minor typos through out. After thinking more I decided that there is only so much perfection you can expect from a novel published on a daily basis with no editor. All in all a perfect web novel and one I am willing to spend all my coin on. Death to the enemies of Invictus!
Beautifully written, the story itself is new from what I've read. A great storyline so far and the use of words are perfectly aligned. This book has great potential, definitely worth a vote.
Wow! I love it! the story of a hesitant hero. truly remarkable narration, strong plot that drives hordes of readers to read the story. it doesn't hurt that the writer belongs to the same nationality as I. rated this a perfect 5 stars!
too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt