great novel. I love it especially the mc who is kindhearted but acted like a evil villain.i truly fall in love with this novel. keep it up like this.
Author here. Originally I posted this story back in January, taking it down as it was in another competition. However, since I did not have any great success in said competition, I have decided to upload exclusively to Webnovel.
First volume is complete and I will be releasing 2 chapters a day while I continue to write the Second volume. For those of you who have already read the first volume, there have been no changes so unless you wish to rehash what you've already read, then there's no need to read again.
A few points to note below:
No romance in first volume despite the romance tag. MC is in Middle School and I am not one to write such things.
This is primarily a slice-of-life/youth drama novel, mixing School Life and competitive sports together.
The book is based in Japan. Names are read as (First name, Family name) ie: Ken Takagi, Daichi Suzuki.
There are some Japanese puns/references throughout which I do my best to explain afterwards, even if it takes some of the humor away from it.
No I am not Japanese, however I do my best to research everything possible.
Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the story. Please feel free to comment below or on any of the chapters should you feel the urge to, I'd be happy to answer them.
Excuse what the fuck? All those trash stories or fanfictions that are ranked in the top don't have even 10% of the awesomeness of this story. I don't know how it's still so low in ratings and still unknown to most of the readers. This one has a quite likable MC, whose personality is quite unknown as he gets more powerful he cares about others less and less, that includes his family too. I just hope that later on he won't puss* out and apologizes them. As the story itself has really good quality writing and addicting to read I would suggest everybody give it a try as it has different Mc for a change. Not your usual "Kind-hearted, naive and peace-loving mega puss* retard" Mc. All my power stones are for you author just don't drop it and keep good work. And I like how he distant to others especially humans, so keep that up too. Maybe he should show some care for his sisters when he's already powerful, but not for parents and his clan, they can die for all we readers care.
This MC is going to be my favourite, the story is fast paced but amazing and the whole gangster thing is intriguing, keep up the good work, totally in love with your story ❤️❤️
The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.
It’ sure that’s you make a lot of mistakes and typo but the story is still interesting, I like your style and I hope you’ll try to find a way to settle those insignificant issues, keep continue and I don’t you’re keeping me waiting til I finish those chapters to upload others… you god me hooked already and be careful with the remaining chapters good job.
Tbh i like the novel a lot. op mc ,new bloodline awesome background story with many reveals as the story progresses...funny stuff and awesome battles ..moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I have read about 500+ chapter so I feel I have enough qualifications to speak on this novel. and overall I'd say if you liked, red sun previous novel you will likely like this one.writing qualityi don't take much notice of writing quality as my brain auto corrects most writing. but I haven't noticed any mistakes. some of the words are a bit confusing though.story developmentthe story developed pretty well all things considered there is always something to draw your attention. the power scaling slowly gets a bit crazy and I'm still waiting on him to deliver the body but it's not boring so that's good.character designpast Cain himself very few other characters are very intreresting. like the female lead is some nobody randomly added on to help Cain develop and we haven't seen his friends in a hot minute. so if you're here for good side character I'd probably leave but apex and Cain are enough entertainment.update stabilityit concerning how frequently this novel is updated.world backgroundas always red sun has crafted a beautiful and unique world with an even more unique powers system.
Not bad, though am not really that of a fan of sci-fi but I can tell this is nice. great work. hope to see more, really loving the plot, really nice
Too much vocabulary to be honest but overall good stuff.
Creative writing. Exemplary leadership shown by Colonel Balogun to help his brother explore his potential. A wonderful example of strong brotherhood.