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Haven’t read the first but I think I started Overgeared and couldn’t get into it. Edit: I just remembered Overgeared. One of the worst light novels I’ve ever read. A game with billions of players where the main character goes out into the wilderness and runs into his childhood bullies who are just chilling there for no reason whatsoever so the mc can kill them. It was so mind blowingly dumb I immediately stopped reading. I also remember there being other ridiculous moments. The game world isn’t nearly as immersive and interesting as God’s Domain. I’m genuinely curious how on earth you think Overgeared is better than Reincarnation.
Start of the novel was good but after that it started to move away from its main traits which make me dislike it a bit, i cant say it really dustanced itself but i dont thinkits that connicted to the main traits.
So many people with broken AF English commenting borderline gibberish.
I was expecting more of the finale but. . Hayz. Every novel I f.ing read, the finale is always RUSH!! God damnit hayz. Oh well, that was a good read. I rate this whole novel 8/10.
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Only 14 chapters so far but it has already gotten me hooked. The story is a bit slow-paced, but honestly, I think it's worth getting through as it allows for steady character and world-building and as a result, the author is painting us a much better picture of the world they've envisioned.
Amazing story! The best I've ever read.
Writing quality- Amazing. Barely any grammatical errors. It's easy to read and understand. There's nothing I can complain about.
Stability of updates- I recently just read this so I can't say much. But the author is on a hiatus(I think) so I'll just give it 5 stars.
Story development- 5/5 again. The story moves along nice. It has the perfect pace and it doesn't skip over anything. Author explains the different plots very well and doesn't leave anything unanswered.
Character design- 5/5 but if I could I'd rate it even higher. I've never been more attached to fictional characters in my life. Side characters are amazing they all grow. Jeremy, Jakes brother, is one of my favorites. I started off hating the guy but by the end, it made me wish for a brother like him. The way he grew and interacts with Jake is simply perfection. Don't get me started on the main family. Noah, the twins, Zeke, and the parents are all written beautifully. Finally, the main character, Jake. He grew so much throughout the story. From not interacting with anyone and being scared of people to going to a boy who's able to freely talk to people(albeit not perfectly) was amazing to watch. He's still not perfect and is still far from being 'normal', he grew a lot. But hey, who really is normal? Everyone has their quirks. And that's one thing this story is amazing at showing.
World Background- Good. 5/5 for me.
Other- Author if you're reading this, I want you to know how much I love this story. I would love for you to come back as soon as possible to continue this story, but I know you probably have things going on in life. I just wanted to let you know that this hands down is the best novel on this app.
Any Chinese Novel with #comedy tag is trash because MC keeps acting stupid in name of Comedy, better stay away from such pest & save your brain cells.
It’s just ok. I feel like I read something really similar a long time ago where after he opens his share group and saves the CEO’s company he meets and saves the daughter?
The he/she thing does seem to be getting worse though. It’s like they’re not even putting in the effort anymore lol.
Also, the entitled gold digger thing really makes me look down on people.Hop she’s gone soon.
The protagonist is lame as f .he becomes a monster trainer to revive his dead parents a lod of BS ,he is described as a cold person who don't put his nose in other people's business and next moment he trolls some random minor because he fcuking can .his naming sense is dumb and becomes unbearable in future .and what is this green hat joke I know what it means but come in they just stretch it too far do no one wears green hats in China dumb novel trash novel cardboard characters useless faceslapping .
A complete plagiarism story of "I'm a doomed villain", as well as a boorish system, which gives out tasks with a large penalty for failure.
English is not my rad language.
I can only say that those who are wealthy enough can enjoy this book since it is locked behind premium. As such I cannot make an accurate review and have decided to give it one stars.
