Wow, what an amazing presentation for chapter 1. The narration is so captivating, I'm sure readers will love this novel. Somehow the author made this novel so good as if we were made to be in that position. It's stunning.
Tamed beast should be divided in to primary and secondary categories in primary the tamer and beast should get mutual benefits like increase physical or mental health or mana or quickening the process and Secondary beasts are those in whom the tamer imposes its will upon them to make them act as he wished
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Look, this story is very hard to read from the get go. At the time I started writing this, I stopped fairly short into trying to read it sure to a lack of punctuation in sentences making it next to impossible to read. Honestly, I think I saw a single comma at the point I couldn't keep going from. If you ever get to editing it with appropriate punctuation I wouldn't mind trying again.
This is a true hero, helpful, working hard to progress, and giving consequences to actions that are not good. Romance, with cultivation, and progression. I need one of those rings. Something to help dreams come true.
The story is getting more interesting with every part and seems real and i always appreciate the choice of words and the language so keep it up and am waiting for the next part
Hi guys. author here. hope everyone is enjoying the story. im just happy to finally be able to wright the world that i created. i really hope that everyone will share this journey with me andcmy characters
The settings reminds me of "Black Clover." The writing quality is amazing, and while the conversations can be a bit better, the story itself is marvelous. Keep up the great work, author!
I can't lie after 337 chapter if you don't like this you have to be mentally insane, the story is really good, I can see if someone doesn't like the time skips, but it works perfectly with this story and I hope the author doesnt stop with the way he is progressing because its perfect??
What a beautiful story. This storyline is intriguing. This book has a lot of potential and great characters. Keep writing. Keep up the good work. ???
The concept behind the story itself is good. But the mc is shown practically as machine whose only job is to eat, sleep, train and dungeon run.. and close to no human interaction. Writing quality is average to say the least as many grammatical mistakes and wrong usage to words can be seen. well, for story development there is nothing of a story only a sort summary of his background and what is now then he just goes around training and dungeon running with no human or world interaction... Character design. . . well, at least the characters that author had given importance to are well described and designed but later in story i got the feeling that the story is all about mc dungeon running with no outside interaction.update stability.. .i don't know about this... World background well, it is well described but as we progress only mc's home, motel and dungeon becomes readers world because nothing is told or happens with mc in relation to that. So in short if you want to read a novel where mc just focuses on getting stronger with nothing else in mind then go ahead. (well, after many chapters some world opening happens with mc but still it can be considered negligible interaction with outer world)