I'm hooked on this story! The characters are beautifully designed and the plot is really starting to take shape. ? Can't get enough of the amazing character designs in this story! ? This story keeps getting better and better! Loving the way the plot is developing. ?
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author desperately tries to be funny but it goes wrong every time.MC is just machine that sleeps , nothing else. And this is a blatant copy of another novel .
Not sure how a person who suddenly find himself in a new world quickly immerse himself into killing and fighting others. Other good novels will follow pattern of the protagonist getting a clear idea of his surrounding before going wild. Murdering someone shouldn't be so easy especially when it's the first time killing someone. Convoluted plot jumping from declaring a life and death duel with half brother to cultivation breakthrough, from running into a dangerous area with no experience to killing someone with no enmity.
So, seems like bad reviews are getting blocked/removed, I wonder how many have expressed negative opinions about this and been removed leaving mainly positive comments.
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Tbh writing quality is ****e why the hell do you use "her" with a male an culture method? And again sorry to be blunt the story has great potential but no matter how good the plot is or other things About it in generel it will be ****e with bad grammar
It seems interesting, but there are many arcs the same as other novels, such as a 5year duel contract with a princess of the sea race, the valley of frozen beasts, the multi-tailed tanuki pet/lover etc
I really like it but its scaring me especially Jane sudden turned bad*** I mean freaky. Anyways, writing and storyflow is amazing. All you need to do is maintain a daily update and everything is perfect. Good luck!
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Really not my cup of tea. It tries to do too many things without successfully doing any of them. It’s got low level low effort comedy, low effort cultivation, and sincerely low effort world building. What makes this book fun? The passives and how they play out, of course. So what does the Author do? Everything else but. And when he does talk about the passives and the system, it feels reluctant and rushed. Why name the book after that if you just want a face slapping, low tier, Cultivation World? Not for me.