Life didn't get easier, even in another world.

Ahem, it's the author here...
Well, as all of you might have noticed, I have quite a lot of spelling and grammatical errors in my novel. I am really trying to solve them but there are still some that I miss. English is not my first language so it's a little bit hard...
So I wanted to apologize for making so many mistakes. Thank you for your understanding.

I think the story is off a pretty good start! There are grammatical and sentence structure errors here and there, but the author said he's doing his best to improve on that. Plus, despite the errors, it still does not take away from the interesting plot and storyline! I think Kairen is so far relatable and you can understand the world from his perspective. I also sympathize with him and his struggles and I can't wait to see more into this second world he has been taken into! Keep up the awesome work, author! And, readers? You should give this story a read!

The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry,
I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itself
But except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.

MC has no backbone and sometimes is the smartest person around and then they are the dumbest person who can't understand anything. The only things the MC's friends do is yell at him nonstop, act superior to him, blame him for things they did, and never take into consideration what he wants to do.

It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them.
There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.

loving the story so far! mc gets pushed around a lot as far as I have read but it seems necessary to develop the story? It's not too annoying yet so I guess that much is alright. Keep it up!