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Hey there!

Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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I just read it.
1. This is a great novel and one of the best so far
2. Plz don't drop it author
3. If anyone knows where I can find more chapters please tell me

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I say this story is quite interesting. the actions are quite describe. the more i read it, the more i want for more. i really wished for this book to get popular soon enough. keep up the good work author.

This is pretty much Slime isekai but even  better. It even has some things which the Slime isekai lacked like romance and a merciless MC.
Keep up the good work Author

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reject humanity and return to monkey and become God ?????????????????????????????????????????????????

this novel would have been awesome if it covered the MC more, but what it covers is the side-characters or let's say mob characters more than the MC?droppping

The reason I'm giving this a such low review is that everything is so simple and underdeveloped. The MC is op which is fine but the way you write him. He seems kinda single-sided. The storyline with Rumi needs to be developed more because even though they are soulmates they still need a more detailed love story. The writing quality is really simple, but it's your first fanfic so I can't blame you. I know that's it is hard to write them but just try to make the story feel real. The character design needs work to because Rumi seems like a simpleminded character.

There is some grammatical mistakes but nothing that it is too evident and annoys the reader. I like it how the author seems to be improving his style as the chapters go on. If you stop at the beginning because it has some mistakes or author inexperience, you gonna regret because the novel becomes great after the chapter 20.