This novel is not what I expected, and I've only read 10 chapters (which also means this review doesn't have any spoilers past what could already be inferred from the synopsis).
First off, writing quality - the language is sophisticated but readable, with vivid descriptions. It has a natural flow that quite literally had me raving out loud about it - I'm a sucker for good quality writing.
Story development, I can't say much about for the time being, similar with update consistency, but I've given them 5 stars because if this novel continues as it is now, it is absolutely deserving of them.
The character design struck me from the first chapter, because it feels genuine!
The dialogue is natural, the actions seem as though a real person might make them. Sure, there's occasionaly what I'd consider a 'movie action' which is slightly more... cheesy than what would be real, but the most important thing is that it doesn't break the immersion.
Finally, the world building is disgustingly good. Mixture of ancient and modern settings... this is an incredible story! I'm honestly enamoured by it, so kudos to the author! You've done amazing
this is the most Chinese wuxia thing I've ever tried to read. unrealistic characters , unrealistic interactions, lack of actual cooking. if u like this type of stuff go for it.
Writing Quality is good but is over all presented in a awkward manner, Update Stability isn't set in a fixed state and is seem to be done on a whim as updates occur from 1 chapter every 3 days to 1 chapter every 20 days though I would like to add that they seem to be trying to get into a schedule of 1 every 3 days and it seems that they are either doing this for fun or improving their English (So don't bash them to hard). Story Development although unique is still very cliché and straight forward which can be good but only if done right but it still doesn't make it un-readable. Character Design seems to be done without much thought and there characters seem overly simplified and just seem to be slaves to the plot and don't have much thought of their own. World Background isn't explained much could be just because it's to early for them to introduce any of it or they just have no plans to introduce it at all but the author did take time to think of a power ranking system to be put in the world in the auxiliary volume so extra props for that. 3.6/5
Overall Review: It's not great It has a comedic charm to it Writing Quality is decent. Update Stability is bad but seems to be improving. Story Develops in a predictable cliché way It's hard to find anything to appreciate about that. Character design other than the comedic charm (Which I'm not a fan of) is to put it bluntly pretty bad. World Background is by far the best as we see the author has taken the time to construct the 'levels' of the world.
Note to the author: Thousands of people are reading your work so people obviously like your stories and my suggest is if you want to get better is to take your time with your work and I guess keep being you so you don't lose that charm. I'm just a idiot so you shouldn't take my words to seriously as I'm by no means qualified to give you advice this is just what I think about your novel.
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this translation is utter garbage..... name of MC often changing, gender of MC often changing too from him to her from he to she, and not to mention the chapter.
even if it is MTL at least give an effort to edit it.
not recomended to spend to unlock the chapter..
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.
Only plot hole so far seems to be when the mc did 10 million damage to an enemy a few hours after logging into the game. Granted, some skills and techniques were used, but no where grand or powerful enough to do 10 mill to an enemy with 1500 hp.
This is quite interesting, the main character is abandoned and becomes a coach. Hopefully he can return to being a professional player, and show that the owner's decision was wrong.
Incubism hmm…. omoshiroi… i shall start thee novel since i thou desire ecchi and plot.…,,,,,,,,,….,,….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,,,,,….,,,,,
Story seems promising I guess, but there are so many mistakes with the writing it’s literally unreadable. I find it impossible to immerse myself in the story when I’m constantly trying to piece together sentences
tbh I quite hate the idea of harem in an idol/showbiz genre. Let's say harem in mediveal and fantasy type novels, harem is often a great fan service. But in a modern and idol at that...I don't really like it but fair enough it's your story. Tho saying all this, I'm still gonna enjoy reading and fighting on your journey.
First off I don't like how the synopsis is not even close to the story. I shouldn't be so confused right off the bat because I'm trying to compare the story especially when put in specific details in the synopsis. Once I got that out the way I tried to actually enjoy the read. I feel it can be a funny read if the story wasn't all over the place changing to different character perspectives at the drop of a hat. The author doesn't do a good job of explaining well really anything either so I feel the story is like a giant puzzle I have to put together sometimes. I do like the idea of the story and I feel if it was explained better it would be more enjoyable because it's something original of which you don't see all that often. I'll keep reading tho hoping it improves.
Legends never die...
They become a part of you...
Haha, just kidding. Good stuff btw. I like how you're actually building on the gaming genre. Love it!!