Based On a True Story [ Complete]

So far, the novel is nothing special, and is even a bit lackluster. Translation quality is fine, very few mistakes, but not impeccable. Updates aren't a factor as I am posting this after finishing the first 20 chapters uploaded. The story is so far not super interesting, the first 16 or so chapters are actually just terrible, but it started to pick up a bit near the end of the first 20. Character designs are not good. There's nothing interesting about the main character besides the fact that they're strong, and even then their strength isn't something displayed in a special or intriguing way, they're just boring, and for a novel which is supposed to revolve around character rather than action, this does a very poor job. World background is fine, but once again, nothing special but competent at the very least somewhat. Overall, from my point leaving off at chapter 20, it may be a novel worth reading. As I stated before, the first 16 or so chapters are almost garbage, but it does start to get slightly more interesting in the last few of the first 20 chapters, and depending on if it continues to get slightly better than it is, it would barely be worth reading, but if it gets quite a bit better, then it definitely will be worth the read.I don't know if you are able to edit reviews, but if so once a few more chapters are up I may change some stuff depending upon the status of the novel at the time

great read! thank you author for sharing your hard work!????????????????????????????????????????????

Pretty good so far, no he didn’t just  “forgive” his ex wife. After gaining power he found out they kicked him out and in such a way that he would hate them so that he would have nothing to do with them and their enemy wouldn’t try and harm him. he found out and decided to look after them anyway. He wasn’t cucked or anything.

simply blatant copy of the legendary  mechanic..........................................................................................................................................................................

I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.

Honeslty, I’m suprised this type of novel was contracted, as I thought this type of theme was agaisnt the TOS…Anyway, this type of theme doesn’t suit my tastes in the least, I abhor this type of plot/development. Well, I dislike romance in general… but I find this type of theme to be especially unsuited to me.Well anyway, I could never read something like this, and I’m unsure and can’t comprehend how other people like this type of theme, but I guess as an author you should only write what you want to write… so I guess I wish you good luck as an author, although I find your tastes to be strange… Even if you like these kind of things, good luck with your dreams…